Alright track, though I wish you'd try out a more aggressive flow at times. The "bring a vet to alarm me" was my favorite bar. Sometimes you didn't really rhyme (travesty/calamity bar) which is obviously essentials, you should also come with bars like the Car Kit one more often. Posted By: Babylon - 2013-10-20
They don't have to essentially rhyme together for them to go together. They are called Slant Rhymes, or a Half Ryhme..where both words have the same 2-3 ending letters. Appreciate the feedbacc though and glad you had some fav. bars. Posted By: UhMAZING - 2013-10-20
Im feeling this style.. keep bangin em! Posted By: Joe MuGGz - 2013-10-22
some real good lines in here, clean up that flow and you could be a problem, keep practice tight my g , pz Posted By: Erupt da Monsta - 2013-10-23
this was alright but notin compared to how kendrick did it and i know u weren't trying to do it like him but this was actually pretty dope. it could be a little bit cleaner though i agree but your're real confident on it and that's the plus about it. about to get my little nigga to do this beat in now lol Posted By: Doer - 2013-10-24
Dope drop uhMAZIN, almost got a hundred plays on this classic nice dude Posted By: Bnas - 2013-10-27
I aint rated the other few tracks i heard from you because i wasnt really feelin em tbh, but i'm feelin this one so ima drop you a 8 on this one. It started off a bit shaky, started sounding a bit corny to me but then i was like damn now he doin' it! lol you rode the beat like a pro in spots, had me noddin my head. lyrics were solid enough, couple weak spots, but for the most part i was diggin it. So basically it was just hit and miss for me otherwise i coulda went 9 on it.
keep doing ya thing man, peace Posted By: ⅃( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)L - 2013-10-31
This is an honest vote for your track. Not worth a 10, though it was really really good with that "Double tap / Read verse about automatic / Green Beans line". SO dope. Posted By: Arakari - 2013-11-22
That mic is too hot, either back up a little or get new one. It'll make your verse sound much better... Word of advice too fam, memorize everrrrrrything. You can really swag out the flow if you feel comfortable with it... You had it rocking for a little bit with the whole Leather Strap/Weather Map bar. Solid drop Posted By: ELOH STACKz - 2013-11-26
listened to this a few days ago off the home page didn't leave a vote...u killed that wole bringin leather back rhyme shit was fire Posted By: Leroy Brown - 2013-11-30
Great track nice lyrics famo, Just progression towards all vocals would improve ya quality its almost like ya not trying which makes you sound monotone (No hate) cuz you got some decent lines fam just something to think about hommie 9's Posted By: TheDirtyKid - 2013-12-02
I liked the bullets size of stringbeans or greenbeans overall good track ~take it easy~ Posted By: Proctologist - 2013-12-07
Pretty good, the audio could be cleaned up some though Posted By: Flyraiment - 2013-12-10
1 word > crack music Posted By: SHARK BOY_ - 2013-12-21
This was dope all the way thru, nice amount of views to homie Posted By: Bnas - 2013-12-28
I thought I voted on this before. It's pretty solid, in my opinion. You would do with more punches. "Better run (DMC) was a great line! Good track, great MC. Posted By: Arakari - 2014-01-19
Nice bars and flow, I enjoy the way u tried to switch up styles. although there was a lot of inteference in certain parts of your vocals which may be due to the type of mic u using to record. And for better production holla at me. could help smoothen out your verses. Other than that Nice shit homie and stay up. Posted By: Kold Krhymez - 2014-01-26
no doubt been a while since I been on and like the new style beef the delivery a little but overall solid. keep em bangin homie Posted By: TheDarkness - 2014-05-31
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