this here is my very very first track i ever wrote i had it since i was about 11 or 12 then dropped it a few moths back .. kinda short but yea Leave some feedback !
This wasn't bad lyrically for your first track. Improved a hell of a lot. Hook was pretty tight too. Good shit man Posted By: Mayneak - 2011-10-18
Sick shit speech!! I like how you did that hook .. i like the singin in it .. remind me of some nate dogg shit ,, mad catchy .. Verse is real nice .. real talk shit .. i love that type of tracks always .. Props for bein your first track ever wrote .. 11 or 12 .. that is real nice for a young kid lol jk coz ur bigger than that now lmao Posted By: ZEE_DA_OUTLAW - 2011-10-19
Haha respect Zee. Posted By: KAM SPEECH - 2011-10-19
very cool speech, pretty cool to see what u started at and how your skill has came along man. was really diggin this could tell you put alot of work into this. mad ill fam Posted By: M3GATRON - 2011-10-19
Not bad man for your first. Takes some time... Always elevating man. Fair Dropped Posted By: Anonymity - 2011-10-20