My storytelling at its best, comments and feedback would be greatly appreciated!
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Always had meaning with a bang in your lyrics master, great listen .. what i would change though is how much energy n emphasis your putting in coz your lyrics are deep try n show emotion through your flow. Posted By: TRIGGERHAPPY - 2013-02-15
Umm the beat was sick , i would say it was my type beat and would have love to spit on it with a lady rapper.... Your flow was good the only thing bothered me was the mastering. rest was gr8888 Posted By: monti - 2013-02-16
Good shit, keep it up can always use some elevation but still pretty good. Posted By: UhMAZING - 2013-02-16
this is nice actually, more like spoken word. story was real nice, stayed on topic. the energy/emphasis critic part is right to a certain extent altho mostly its on the mark. the "outrunning me" part, is ironic coz thats the 1 part the beat seems to be outrunning u. a couple of words to many, otherwise im very impressed. this is an honest 9, but given some tracks that get 10s on here i cant justify not letting u have atleast 1 10 on the list. good work and keep this up. Posted By: Boss-MC - 2013-02-17