THIS IS NOT BASED ON MY CURRENT LIFE NORE, NORE MY RELATIONSHIPS, I JUST HEARD THE BEAT & THOUGHT I WOULD WRITE A DEEP TRACK "REAL HIP-HOP" RESPECT EVERYONE WHO PEEPS IT ALWAYS
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THIS IS NOT BASED ON MY CURRENT LIFE NORE, NORE MY RELATIONSHIPS, I JUST HEARD THE BEAT & THOUGHT I WOULD WRITE A DEEP TRACK "REAL HIP-HOP" RESPECT EVERYONE WHO PEEPS IT ALWAYS "i THINK LETS BEEF TAKES AWAY FROM MY REAL QUALITY" UMMM ?? Posted By: IllesTMarX - 2012-02-18
Showing diversity and basically trying new shit Posted By: IllesTMarX - 2012-02-18
Love the track but dont like the hook or the title, although i totally understand the meaning i just cant picture telling my girl she's my nicotine.... she'd prolly slap me for comparing her to a cigarette. ~100 Posted By: Slypro - 2012-02-18
@Slypro ya respect that fam I met that how I keep going back like an addiction ? But I respect all feedback unless its just my hataz talkin "ppl I got beef wit lol" but Slypro I respect ya comment I post my tracks on LB for advise and ratings its not official I might still change the hook up before its finalized on CD ? Posted By: IllesTMarX - 2012-02-18
Interesting metaphorical track Marx. I like the fact that you got your own style and don't try and sound like other mcs on the site/in the industry. Deep shit, and hearfelt. Posted By: Willy Grubz - 2012-02-19
sikk bro especially second verse...real ish ...dime Posted By: dbang - 2012-02-19
Illest doin it REAL on this track here, nice work, keep on grindin out the tracks brudda! ~WORLDWIDE~ Posted By: Crack Money - 2012-02-19
TEAM CANADA, MARX BACK AT IT LIKE CRACK ADDICTS. I LIKED THE FEEL OF THIS JOINT, FLOW WAS ON POINT, HELLA EZzZ DIME FAM, KEEP GRINDIN ILLEST Posted By: Bnas - 2012-02-19
Different and unique concept, but dope and original nonetheless. I felt like it missed in some places, but still fire. Keep elevating. Posted By: Wonder Gurl - 2012-02-20
This track wasn't bad the 2nd half was alot stronger than the 1st. Felt like the beginning had too many complete sentences or the sentences connected funny Idk it could just be the accent ...anyway good job... Posted By: Marx - 2012-02-20
yo nice shit fam.. dope beat, lyrics, rode the beat, kiiled it. Posted By: Wayco - 2012-02-20
I was feelin this...you did ya thing on this. Beat was ill and you did it justice. I like the creativity on the track. 10z Posted By: EL BASTARD - 2012-02-20
this is real hip hop...expressin 1 self...!nice beat good flows...hope ya success in yr future...!! Posted By: Pem~ - 2012-02-21
I think you could've avoided saying "Just" so close together a time or two..but dime. Posted By: B-F-M - 2012-02-21
mark concept was dope had some bars tha played nice to the story and built nice with the beat..i dident like the hook and the fact this the 2nd joint you bit a beat from some bodie.....,e stot and strate dropped on this joint a 6year ago-called it never ends...come on son....the 2nd.....smdh.im a give you a 9 it had its highs and lows... Posted By: RELLE - 2012-02-22
^^lmfao whateva Relle I aint even hear it so I aint know what u talkin about ????? & what was my first one ..?? everyone recycles beats unless u have a producer/DJ I do but I didn't use one of his beats cuz this is for my 2nd Mixxtape Im doing an Album also tx for the rate Posted By: IllesTMarX - 2012-02-22
& nodisrespect it was 6 years ago u said get over it homie Posted By: IllesTMarX - 2012-02-22
Good Metaphorical use of nicotine. I pretty much cosign wilygrubz on this, You always had your own distinct style, and don't try to be something your not, thats whats up... I was really feeling the emotion of the second verse and the hook was pretty cool. Its nice to see your progression since last track I heard from ya. stay grinding man, Posted By: M3GATRON - 2012-02-22
Lost a point for not real lyrics. Its got a nice sound, sick flow and tech, but you knew that before you showed me.
#IHateSellOutz Posted By: Double Ŧ - 2012-02-22
^ yo homie if u read it I said not my current life nomore I went through it tho ..."realtalk" Posted By: IllesTMarX - 2012-02-22
bahahaha at the fool that said someone else used this beat 6 years ago, lmao, so fuckin what, that's hip hop and at this level who cares if ten ppl go in on the beat, its a good beat? lol nice work marx Posted By: Rhymenosaurus - 2012-02-25
my dude still droppin nice shit!! 10s Posted By: Boss-MC - 2012-02-26
i felt that u coulda came alil harder or with some more know;edge on the track on other hand i felt the passion and motivation threw ye vocals Posted By: uheheu - 2012-02-26
Good track felt that u was alil slow but i liked how u brag in the nicotine Posted By: uheheu - 2012-04-12
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