Short one, but good. i don't know how to give feedback on a cypher, its just like a story.

Posted on: 2015-04-20 07:36:54

This piece is awe-inspiring. The flow was chill and you didn't fail to get your point across. You snapped around the middle part of it and kept it going throughout the rest of the verse. I can read this over and over again and it will satisfy the mood. Makes me wanna go out and actually do something w/ my life for a change lol Thanks for the read man. Would give a 10 if I could but Lb hasn't fixed the voting for cyphers yet

Posted on: 2015-04-21 05:57:33

yeah man this was an ill little spit here, it definitely makes you think twice about being complacent and satisfied with what you currently have, as it gives you a want and desire almost a yearning if you will for more. It started a little slow, but thats normal for this type of thing, and then bam in the middle you straight popped off. I thought you held that very well for the rest of the verse. Overall this was dope man, keep it up and keep giving us dope bars to read. Thanks.

Posted on: 2015-04-21 23:47:46

ya the content was super dope would love to hear some audio on it and how the flow would be from your perspective....some nice lil wordplay 2 gd shit fam

Posted on: 2015-04-22 00:32:57

Really enjoyed the read, inspirational to say the least. You stuck to the topc and kept your schemes. I also would enjoy to hear this audio to brother, but even as a acapella it would sound good also. Good work, keep it coming!

Posted on: 2015-04-22 02:49:19

Message was solid, Would have been nice to see more to it.

Posted on: 2015-04-22 19:55:47