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Been awhile, feedback's appreciated. ( *peak )
Posted on: 2014-11-29 06:53:14 
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Nice shit man, it sure has been a while.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2014-11-29 06:56:39 
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It'll b ah 32 at some point. I appreciate tha view.
Posted on: 2014-11-29 15:17:49 
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short and sweet..
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2014-11-29 15:25:42 
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This was decent... I felt like the main drawback with this was the fact your four syllable rhyme scheme was really only two syllables (the first one and the last one), with the stuff between them having various sounds that didn't all necessarily correspond to each other. That said, this was overall good.
Posted on: 2014-11-29 17:41:03 
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solid
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2014-11-29 20:27:21 
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I fuck w/ it
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2014-11-29 22:00:36 
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Shits solid bruh. Lemme know when u add too it. peace.
Posted on: 2014-11-30 21:15:47 
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Dope shit.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2014-12-04 21:16:20 
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