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16 Lines (8 Bars) Blind Drop
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Text Cypher
  Length: 16 Lines each

"Tha Life We Live"

B U R D E N
Tha B L A C K - S H E E P




B U R D E N

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Cypher started: July 28th 2014 at 23:17



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  Staff Comments


This was nice. Scheme was cool. Nice flow from line to line. I agree with LOCK though, could do with more in depth/story telling to it. Kinda seems to jump from You talking about people perspective of life to "watch out for that guy" type of thing. Needs more substance etc. Still, not a bad piece.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2014-07-31 20:09:50 Private Message Óðinn


 

 
  Member Comments


Scheme was nice. Good shit
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2014-07-28 23:27:41 Private Message Wizdumb


strong points were the multis n flow of it...good stuff here, keep at it homie
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2014-07-30 14:13:11 Private Message Stotty P


Cosign with Lock on the good multi scheming. There are little edits here and there that can be done for syllable count/flow (like "what is" -> "what's" .... very minor changes ... lol). I felt that the story was pretty good, but the rhyming was better. I felt that you approached depths you didn't necessarily enter, but that is okay, especially if you are considering this for a track on an album that progresses a concept. Good writing as always from you MadVerbs. Keep up that pen game and keep it 100.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2014-07-30 14:13:11 Private Message The Ghost of Freak


Good looks on tha feed, I appreciate it.

Posted on: 2014-08-06 01:20:24 Private Message B U R D E N


Dope...and facts dropped all through here, lyrical truth and poetic...i dig it
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2014-08-06 01:48:58 Private Message SWAVY


Please make this into a track if you didn't already.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2014-10-16 17:39:29 Private Message MiD-NiGht

 

 

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