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cheeeeaaaaaa. right what i needed. g'shiii ma dudes. get that mic tho.
Rated: 10
Posted on: 2013-11-21 20:52:47 
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started off a lil basic to me but dang man the fire started in the middle and it ended real nice. this whole shit right here:
"thug ways'll leave yo jaw swollen from rights. I'm jus saying..
B ah man & if u rap own what u write!
Make sure there's meaning in what u deliver like ah rose to ah wife.
Cause rapping 'bout gold & tha ice has been old ..& it's like selling your soul to tha mic! shii
I got tha flow that is niice, stayin loyal while u hoes showing different sides..
like rolling ah dice"
that was illy bro, i woulda went an 8 coz it was decent overall, but ima dime it based on those few lines
Posted on: 2013-11-23 02:14:50
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seems like my vote glitched, but i'm not sure, lemme know if it went through okay
Posted on: 2013-11-23 02:16:09
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Was a nice cypher, in some places it seemed really simple and in others it seemed like you was trying to go a lil bigger. I like the whole "Real" vibe of it. In the beginning it was pretty simple..then you started building up momentum a lil bit. the ending could of been brought to a close a lil smoother. Would of liked to see a bit more complexity but all and all..it was a nice piece.
Rated: 8
Posted on: 2013-11-23 11:38:51
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Nice
Rated: 10
Posted on: 2013-11-23 11:47:14
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"My life's been ah landmine, I'm jus killin' to step.."
Rated: 9
Posted on: 2013-11-29 15:59:34
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#KEEPGRINDIN'
Rated: 8
Posted on: 2013-11-30 16:02:30
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nicely done..i like how it started off especially..syllable s slip off a little towards the end but didn't take away too much..all in all good job
Rated: 10
Posted on: 2013-12-04 20:08:55
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some true shit ya wrote... dope
Posted on: 2014-01-12 18:25:55
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Ten
Posted on: 2014-01-12 18:33:02
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This was pre Dope. It's always good to read something people can relate to. Dimed for sure.
Rated: 10
Posted on: 2014-01-13 00:59:38
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gs
Rated: 9
Posted on: 2014-02-25 18:09:33
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Nice flow to it..feels a little basic as far as content. It almost sounds like another cypher of yours wit the autobio type references......
Rated: 7
Posted on: 2014-12-07 22:28:46
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shit was dope, the flow was clean!
Rated: 10
Posted on: 2014-12-07 23:02:18
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