This was very nice. The imagery was on point and the mood was set nicely. The rhyme schemes weren't impressive as they weren't that intricate but they were done well and smoothly allowing the piece to flow. Good shit.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-06-03 20:15:30

good try .love the complex shit
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-06-07 12:26:35

spoken word shit lol reminds me a bit of pity the plight from ill manors, idk if you seen it or not but very well done man. 10+
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-06-11 03:38:27

Honestly i usually dont follow these straight through because when im spitting it back it doesn't rhyme or flow... this i could flow consistently to the end.. why you got my vote.. keep it up bro
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-06-17 23:37:39

Nice drop this had amazing imagery and is why it gets my vote. Dimed
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-06-20 13:12:19

this was piff/ good read bro
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-06-22 20:23:02