tried setting this up for Grizz, RULE, Swishha, not sure if it did..jus spittin bars wit sum of my fav Textcees..

Posted on: 2013-03-11 08:45:23

Liked this drop with the flow had some decent metaphors nothing to hard hittin but i def liked it

Posted on: 2013-03-31 10:10:09

"this my 'metaphorical warfare' Navy Seals RAP SHIT, no Medal of honor, Ill leave you sealed in a CASKET, A.C.R, silencer, my impact is DRASTIC, theres no stretchin the truth son' aint fuckin with ELASTIC" ..... Naaah. Took forever and the pay off wasn't worth it.. a stretch/elastic association? c'mon ..... "jus PLASTIC/EXPOSIZES, you'll know im FUROCIOUS, when spittin mad 'venom' you gon see my shits CORROSIZE. yal gon be like 'we aint fuckin wit em' Trill like NO SHIT, SO QUIT, and let a Nikka get on back ta MOE SCRIPTS" ..... You need to work on your spelling "exposize = explosive" and "CORROSIZE = CORROSIVE" and why are you using quotations when you're not even using any punches or plays that relate to what you're quoting? quotations are used to highlight a connection, there was none, because there wasn't a punch at the end. the rest is just more of the same, parts highlighted as if they lead somewhere but don't mixed with spelling errors. No hate but I'd probably give this a 3, tops. keep at it though.

Posted on: 2013-03-31 10:17:12