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damn, the message was mad dope..nicely composed yo
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-02-27 22:42:32 
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pretty dope my dude, you should get into topical battles since you obviously got the gnack for incorporating a real meaning into your verses. The only thing i didnt like was how you typed "shii" lol i'm getting tired of that for some reason haha but that's a minor thing, i just had to mention it. my favorite line was
"All they'd see.. is Vicodin & that might have been why they balled fo' weeks!
Why they called the teach about issues that couldn't be solved w/ speech!" that was pretty illy
I gave it an 8
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2013-02-28 01:42:51 
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nice.. im just getting into some story telling shit, this was nice to read it flowed good.. do you spit this in public or is it just a key?
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-02-28 08:49:35 
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Dis da kinda shit I wanna hear, gud shit fam bam
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-02-28 14:56:27 
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Definitely diming you on this one for the great meaning behind it. Keep it up my dude.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-02-28 14:59:14 
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:-)
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-02-28 15:31:46 
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Dope shit my dude...Enjoyed the read homie Flow was on-point and stretched the Topic...Good shit "Its Classick" 100'z
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-02-28 15:38:53 
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cool
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2013-02-28 15:40:18 
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This was an extremely dope read. It flowed really nicely and has a nice message. 10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-02-28 15:47:29 
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SO REAL AND SO DEEP.....YOU SHOULD CATALOGUE ALL THESE UP AN GET AN ALBUM DOWN, THE WAY YOU WRITE THESE YOU DONT NEED A STRUCTURE OR CREATIVE STYLE THA WORDS JUS FLOW THEMSELVES. CAN RELATE TO ALOT OF THIS TOO HOMIE, MAD PROPS.... peace
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-02-28 16:31:28 
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Right on dude. Cyphers favour you.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-02-28 17:05:27 
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This was dope holmes.. I like how you spreading a positive message thru ya writtens.. ive been walkin down that path lately as well. too much negative occurances happenin these days. n its only gettin worse.
props G 100
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-02-28 17:10:58 
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Real deep... Nice work
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-02-28 17:19:18 
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Another dope read.. Keep'em coming..
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-02-28 20:28:44 
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Nice Drop
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-02-28 21:35:17 
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Dope shit I can tell you worked on your syllable count here yo.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-03-01 01:05:41 
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Very clean composition and very clear message delivery bruh
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-03-01 15:48:01 
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love the depthniss of the story bro..sad tho..makes people think bot wuts real..10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-03-01 21:44:01 
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Really nice, I can see you're improving. A lot of emotion and good content in this one. Story was easy to follow and the schemes were good. My only issues is the kids' ages were a little confusing to me. Besides that, very strong piece. Keep it up.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-03-02 00:26:34 
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its easier said than done my nigga
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-03-02 15:16:34 
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Deep shit. Liked the last few bars, Flowed really well. Keep it up. Nigga what are you the cypher king. They need to make a title for that lol
Posted on: 2013-03-02 19:45:53 
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Meant to put that with it. Good shit
Posted on: 2013-03-02 19:46:12 
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yeah homie mad shit
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-03-03 00:30:55 
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this was real thorugh and thourhg.. i felt it mad.. nd u elevatin...
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-03-03 15:03:29 
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Nice, nice, nice this is what u should do/////
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-03-03 16:04:10 
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yo this was dope straight from the heart and very well written
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-03-03 18:48:41 
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Deep shit bro!
Posted on: 2013-03-04 17:03:20 
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Goood stuff
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2013-03-05 14:08:38 
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Im with HVK on this one. 8 for the reality vibe. Good shit.
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2013-03-05 17:23:54 
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Keep killing it!
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2013-03-06 13:55:28 
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You have some of the best stories family, I love reading your stuff keep it up MadVerbs always supporting brother.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-03-08 18:17:38 
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Dope
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-03-09 00:49:09 
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Dope shit my dude.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-03-09 15:50:49 
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Shit was Deep Bro Nice
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-03-10 19:28:33 
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Deep bro. Much respect.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-03-14 20:50:56 
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Freshness, I like the emotion, definitely dope, keep it up
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-03-21 04:48:04 
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