damn a typo here and there, my bad.. shoulda went thru it better. but shit's w.e

Posted on: 2013-01-22 23:18:01

pretty good. I like the POV here. nice flow, coulda been a lil smoother n a spot or two, but enjoyable read #LEGALIZEIT
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-01-22 23:38:42

Throw this shiiii on waxxxx
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-23 02:03:26

dopeness, your cyphers be riding, you got this story shit down pat now bro... need to start droppin tracks! lol
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-01-23 03:18:24

Im getting friggin mad of repeating myself MV lol. RECORD THIS ISHHHHHH!!!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-23 11:58:43

Going to be completely honest. This would be nice on a track like the others stated. I felt it started off slow. Then it picked up and got to the real point towards the end. It had a good meaning that many can relate to. Overall, this was pretty good.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2013-01-23 19:35:34

Got a nice lil story here. The other comments are on point. I'd like to hear you recite this, and it's a bit cliche like Dave was getting at, though stronger written imo. Some emotional tugging going on. If this is the style/content you wanna write on, I'd like to really see you pull in some specifics and give us strong imagery to put us there. Classsickkkk
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-01-23 19:46:42

I really liked this, I could hear it in my head as I was reading it you should make this an audio. good message too. nice work
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-01-23 20:02:14

Ripped! good shit my nigga
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-23 22:24:40

haha i likethe concept..... i would like to see you really up ya game on the topicals tho pimp... get out the box... step up the multi and metaphor game .... real nice story tho bro, keep droppin em..
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2013-01-24 00:51:03

nice lines
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2013-01-24 09:15:39

You already know, get a fuckin mic already lol.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-28 03:17:25

some good flow right here, i see the irony here, dudes out there killin, and the mr. nice guy, got pinnd instead..
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-01-28 13:20:04

This was a dope read imo. Flowed real nice and the storytelling ability was on point. Dimed
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-02-26 12:21:43