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"Poetic Justice Round 2 - Allegory"




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Cypher started: January 17th 2013 at 18:07


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The theme here was St Peter's Tears. The piece is written from the perspective of St Peter as he rests beside the Gates of Heaven. The concept which links the St Peter, the literal and metaphorical meanings is that of Pearls. From his privileged position at the Gates, St Peter reflects on the human nature of those who pass by his gates into heaven.

Posted on: 2013-01-17 18:40:24 Private Message Jam Jar


The 'Pearls' are the literal pearls which he weaves around the bars of his gates (the pearly gates into heaven...), but the metaphorical nature sees pearls as souls. Comparing the dirty and undiscovered pearls with those that are polished and made into jewelry or family heirlooms, it is reflecting on the nature of Goodness - whether it is more pure to be extravagant and celebratory in one's soul, or whether it is the unpolished pearls - like the rough diamonds - whose understated purity, less garish, carries greater goodness.

Posted on: 2013-01-17 18:43:58 Private Message Jam Jar


Damn Jam, that was brilliant.

Posted on: 2013-01-17 20:45:54 Private Message Letum

 

 

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