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It picked up near the ned imo, it was an alright read tho.. Finally someones bring back the cypher section haha
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-11-25 03:40:09 
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I'll say this shit was dope. I liked ya multis and concepts.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-11-25 12:57:07 
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ac is in this shit.... Diming this broski. pretty nice read
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-11-25 13:12:19 
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one word....wow
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-11-25 13:22:56 
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TRAPPING ALL THOSE thirsty lips flirting with certain myths, of urgent sips that never CAPTURE SWALLOWS but want to bad so they ASK WITH SMALL HOPE ...That was your best section. I got what you were shooting for here, but I feel like it could have been executed better. Another piece of advice, when writing cyphers on serious topics, don't focus on long multies. Also you don't need to cap them. If you make the multies shorter & it leads to line that are phrased better it benefits you. This was a solid piece though.
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-11-25 17:07:51 
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Aight.
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-12-01 01:25:05 
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Superb
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-12-02 17:54:10 
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I agree with Final that it picked up near the end. Watch them multies tho fams, yo flow's a lil choppy in places because of them. IMO at least. Some serious things being said so respect for that. Overall nice read.
Posted on: 2012-12-03 14:55:00 
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good read... cant vote but id throw a very high 8 to low 9...
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-01-10 08:26:39 
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nvm.. here we go..
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-01-10 08:27:37 
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I don't really fuck with 8 lines cyphers but this was nice, good shit.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-01-10 08:36:04 
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nice drop
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2013-04-25 00:39:26 
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