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Text Cypher
  Length: 32 Lines each

"Just The Start."

B U R D E N
Tha B L A C K - S H E E P




B U R D E N

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Cypher started: October 25th 2012 at 02:58



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  Staff Comments


def should be put down on the wax....loving the deep content heart-felt....cypher s gotting better i see cant hate that....love the piece
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-02-23 15:35:52 Private Message Blocc


 

 
  Member Comments


Good shit fam.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-10-25 03:10:55 Private Message Execute


Actually read it...

Posted on: 2012-10-25 03:11:54 Private Message B U R D E N


nice lyrics
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-10-25 03:55:49 Private Message Nephes


I See You Man; That Growing Up Story
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-10-25 14:30:11 Private Message Lizman


Good shit holmes. vivid detail.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-10-25 15:00:56 Private Message Aggo


Amazing bro, that was some real shit. Keep at it your definitely growing as a writer.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-25 16:08:36 Private Message blrick


Dont usually read text cyphers and battles but this one was worth it.. deep man.. thats always the way to go with music... from the heart...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-25 17:08:38 Private Message Pugz


Yo g'looks Pugz, def. appreciated. I appreciate all feed.

Posted on: 2012-10-25 20:43:58 Private Message B U R D E N


WOW! This really is your best work I was rapping it in my head which I was reading it and it went amazingly together rhymes were nice and I love the meaning in this too alot of real talk here....a well deserved 10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-25 20:46:57 Private Message Master-Mind


dope shit. good story.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-10-25 20:57:22 Private Message Letum


Yo I wasn't even tryna have a story behind it, really that shit just happens as I write.

Posted on: 2012-10-25 21:00:16 Private Message B U R D E N


true shit all of it ,very nice cyph , 9 for content -1 coz its a bit depressing though lol i like a cyph that shows hope or adversity or with a twist , not just a rant about how crap life is for EVERYONE , good writing though , keep it up :D
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-10-26 14:56:12 Private Message ItsNaturill


damn nice cypher fam kept it real
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-26 14:59:28 Private Message StickUpArtist


Another good one from you.. This was pretty good.. I think im gonna just stop commenting on your cyphers and just drop the rate..
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-26 15:00:58 Private Message Apollyon


there ya go
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-26 16:59:38 Private Message Master-Mind


10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-27 13:57:20 Private Message DangerDoom


This ones dimed all the way, deep as a long time bruh
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-27 14:13:07 Private Message ADvOcAtE™


great cypher fam , a lil dark but it works well, very impressed dimed
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-27 14:53:32 Private Message MYST


This was deep. A few places that seemed a bit rushed or didn't really fit in with the rest of it, but overall it was nice, good wording and nice meaning, executed well and really got your feelings across. Well done.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-10-27 15:38:36 Private Message IV


U killin it Verbs u Should Go battle aye Verb lol im kiddin
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-10-28 22:38:47 Private Message Eizenberg


nice drop homie, deep and heart felt, this one hit home!!!!! I can relate to a lot of what was said here, structure and multies were a lil meh here and there, but def worth the read. I enjoyed it fam
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-28 23:09:43 Private Message ozark


Enjoyed this read, dime.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-11-03 05:47:35 Private Message AfterThought


This was def dope you need to get on a mic dope multies and the realness about life was dope 10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-11-03 20:29:52 Private Message Mr-Felon


Good Shit
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-11-04 16:31:57 Private Message Haze_Bandit


fking dope. deep, good content, flowed well...easy 10/10 and if there was an 11/10 i'd give it that haha - no exaggeration.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-11-05 16:39:42 Private Message Endoplazmik


ive watched you elevate yo, i feel proud, you are a monster with this shit now homie,flow was crazyyy
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-11-06 16:17:01 Private Message Erupt da Monsta


good shit fam
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-11-23 01:45:45 Private Message tyco RC


dang man this is some pretty original type shit. i'd say that it's not a dime as far as some of the fundamentals go, but ima dime it anyway based on the feeling i get from it. oh and just a minor side note: when you said "Okay this is the last bar I've got for you. lol " i thought to myself that shit shouldnt be in there hehe.. not a big deal just figured i'd mention it. anyway, first dime i gave in a minute, keep it coming
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-11 23:50:28 Private Message Dirty Work


''got me writing more than Pac!" That's an awful lot of writing, cause that dude wrote several songs when he went to the BATHROOM lol. I know you didn't mean it literally probably (or maybe you did which would be impressive) but regardless it was just to put emphasis on a point but it just kind of caught my attention lol. so used to 'defeat' it's like you've been 'rasied in a shoe' -- dope line man. i like your meta's and wordplay you sneak in there sometimes. Overal l a very good lyrical piece, but more than that, the overall message of this. Starting out talking about your sad family life and whatnot, the struggles with your brother passing/dad leaving/mom crying, yet you STAY STRONG and keep keeping on. I tried doing something similar to this believe it or not fam, (i was on so many fucking pills) and my negative emotions got the best of me and I kept on talking about the bad times (i had more bad times than most ppl) and I couldn't even finish. I went into literally SICK details.. blah.. It's something I'm going to finish and put on here one day. Point is you finished all the way through with a great message, you did what I couldn't quite put into words. But I feel like the most negative part of my journey is OVER, NOW, but when I tried to write, it was in the middle of it all really lol, so yeah.. in conclusion, great job from me bro. Respect from me fam. And I noticed, a lot of these words/rhyme schemes you used would flow real well and actually sound good on audio...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-13 12:08:14 Private Message Evolution


put this shiii down yo
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-14 02:58:15 Private Message GRizzEAT


Dimed.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-15 04:48:32 Private Message Askari


As always... RECORD THIS SHIT YO! lol. You already know.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-15 11:19:21 Private Message RULE


This was a good piece. I liked it overall. It flowed pretty well and the multies were pretty tight. It was sort of scatter brained though. Like it'd just jump around. You could have transitioned between ideas better. But overall this was still solid.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-12-16 16:29:46 Private Message Black Book


I'm impressed, Only problem I have with this is I've read cyphers about this sort of topic too many times. With that said this is one of the better ones that revolve around the topic. I'm diming this, try get it hotlisted.....
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-25 21:31:16 Private Message Xplissit


this was some super real shit that hit home.... very niice mad. Impressed, stoytelling was excellent here// and this would be mad niice recorded fam
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-08 02:14:06 Private Message Mind Fuck


good lyrics nicely drop
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2013-01-08 17:57:23 Private Message richied25


not bad son. dig it. especially the last bit. like RULE said tho. you should hop on that mic son.

Posted on: 2013-01-08 19:42:56 Private Message GOOD GRIEF


You got a knack for cyphers, kid. Good read fam
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-01-08 20:14:31 Private Message TalkSick


nice cypher i dont really read text cyphers but this one flowed together nicely. cosign rule though......you need ta RECORD this shit
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-01-14 13:15:31 Private Message stricc


Tight shit...deep shit..
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-17 18:45:17 Private Message Rounin


Yo man, I ain't going to lie. I can relate to this a lot man. I really love the emotion and expression you let out on this. If there was a higher rate than 10. I'd go higher. But man, This is track material straight up. #Classick
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-17 19:04:13 Private Message KAM SPEECH


yo for real. dimed. real shit, came straight from your heart evidently. dope shit with a couple wordplay factors in there too. props fam, you killin it.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-18 15:09:04 Private Message rentonsickboy


Now this is the shit I'm talking about. Lots of details, specifics, ect. Only thing that tripped me up was the word 'start' twice up near the top. Felt like it slowed down a bit in the middle but the start and end.....whew. Good shit my man.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-23 20:03:43 Private Message Dono


Some dope shit my dude...real nice flow to it and I'm like tha rest of tha people on here..ya need to drop this shit wit a mic.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-24 00:16:30 Private Message Top Notch


WOW THATS DEEP AND REAL SON.....I LIKE REAL ISSUES AND READING INSIGHTS INTO PPL's LIVES AND FEELINGS THEY EXPRESS IN THA WRITTEN WORD.....LIKED THA 'USED TO DEFEAT RAISED BY A SHOE' PART THAT WOZ NICE, WOZ NICE TO SEE YOU ADDIN A FEW QUIRKS LIKE THAT INTO AN EMOTIONAL SCRIPT AS IT REALLY UMPHs THA VERSE.....GOOD SHIT MAYNE IMMA RATE YOU A 10.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-02-02 17:17:20 Private Message HVK


woooorrrrrrrrrdddd.. i rapped this shit out loud sounds good fam... you should just spit this shit accapella and throw it on the tube or something bruh... shits dope though 10. you've inspired me to write something lol --- back to my original comment lol..
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-02-11 02:32:40 Private Message Xanda

 

 

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