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You really gotta start recording these. Felt this, especially the first half of the first verse. Keep doing your thing MV.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-08 11:24:49 
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needs a little structure within the verses, but the concepts are there...nice job with the story telling...keep it up...^ agreed
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-08 12:47:04 
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yeah this had some dope moments, structure was decent, the storyline was nice, multis were cool, solid drop bro
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-10-08 13:37:55 
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agree ^^
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-08 13:49:21 
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DAMN MENT REVAN ...SLOW RESPONSE
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-08 13:50:07 
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great read... keep'm comin...
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-08 17:18:15 
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I'm really feelin this one coz it actually has some insight to it, not just general lyrics. The chorus is cool, but i actually think it's not as good as the verse. i mean the idea is tyte but i'm just thrown off by the words "a plane or a train or maybe a car" it just has a lame sound to it when compared to the verse imo especially if youre gonna be hearing it 4 times in the song. i aint tryna diss lol the drop is dope overall, i'm just looking for anything about it that i can critique. keep doing your thing bro i gave it a 9
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-10-08 23:27:54 
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I agree with REV too man, you should really start recording these lines man!!! SOR always killing shit!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-09 07:09:51 
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Solid Drop Mate. S.O.R to tha fullest..
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-10-09 11:05:46 
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Solid drop with the concepts and multi's. I would like to see this dropped on audio just to get a good listen. Nice work.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-09 12:32:40 
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gs
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-09 17:43:11 
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Was likin this homie. Lyrics are real and understanding. People can relate everywhere with this. Dropped a dime on it. props G
keep elevating.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-10 23:03:23 
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fucking FIRE. I like the message, dope lyrics, good chorus... 9/10
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-10-12 17:30:23 
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Really good piece here I like that its real and not about the same old commercial crap that some people write about...the lyrics are good make this into an audio it has to be big
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-10-12 17:47:03 
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SOR in it! diggin the concept of the drop homie! i agree with a few of the above statments u should start recordin fam! dimes all day-
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-12 18:34:32 
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Good shit, i feel this was a dope read.. Has, some dope moments. Great story, was real shit. Though, not lyrical it was dope.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-12 22:25:39 
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heres a PROPA dime ma dude.. keep elevatin
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-13 00:00:27 
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This was tight, good shit fam.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-13 06:37:35 
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This is a good message man. People can't tell you how to ''structure it better'' or what the fuck ever, this is your work, you make it how you want it. No one else will write realer shit brotha. Get back at me with a fair.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-18 20:53:31 
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I read this before sorry about not tossing the rate my Fault bro..... This was pretty dope in places. Solid all round to be honest. I'm tossing a dime on it fam..... Chorus was fresh not the usual shit
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-19 19:05:58 
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Theres nothing i havent already said.. This is another good read from you...
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-10-20 00:40:53 
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really liked this one. that chorus is nice yo.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-01-13 21:49:33 
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Dam this was nice both verses
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-01-13 23:12:03 
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Shiiite.. my life? Growing up was all about backpacks and thumbs up but now I'm older with packed bags of that good stuff! Yeahh, just some real words nah mean. Nothing about cash, bitches & cars.. over hyped dumb shit. On some real shit tho, Live that dream, whatever it may be. Where ever you're from.. be proud to call that place home & never give up. Only reach higher & keep your eyes on the goals..... START RECORDIN...Ur shiii is gooch bro
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-01-30 03:03:11 
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