gave it an 8...like the realness man, some nice metephors in there aswell, you could do better at multies though.... thats just what i think man, good stuff.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-09-06 12:44:42

Dope flow and Nice delivery here. There was a punch I liked in there too which was creative. Yo, if you think I'm whack then imagine a painting that's mounted upon the perfect wall. If you think I'm trash then tempt me and that picture becomes nasty like an old lady fainting in the middle of a mall. Keep grindin, Verbs. I always enjoy your cyphers, fammo.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-09-06 12:44:58

G'looks.

Posted on: 2012-09-06 12:47:56

Niner
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-09-06 19:40:39

Good shit bro! I liked it keep it up.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-09-07 03:31:20

I think it started off really well and the concept drew me in. There were a few lines like the picture/old woman bit that I didn't feel so much, but overall I thought it was a nice cypher. Keep writing and keep shit real. Good work.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-09-07 14:59:19

8.7, at the ending you was going in ! nice flow & delivery, good drop.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-09-08 13:18:05

nice
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-09-08 19:13:05

felt like this was more of a collection of thoughts, and could use a little more structure...definite ly has some concepts in there, just need to take the extra time to bring it full circle...keep at it man
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-09-25 13:14:05

My dude fuckin' killed it straight man, you have good story's fam you know to structure 'em right. SOR!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-03 13:30:37

good keep it up
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-10-17 14:06:25