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That was a nice ending twist. I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Everything flowed well and I could feel the guy. ..............From your number one, biggest fan, this is Sta....Teek. Good work on this.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-02 17:35:25 
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Not going to lie this was the best cypher I have read in ages.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-02 18:37:17 
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Shit was dope bro noticed a broken multi or 2 so wont dime it based off that flaw otherwise lyrics are piff
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-09-02 18:56:57 
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Dope as fuck how long in creation
DIMED
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-02 19:09:10 
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Murderous swag I's a hater it's a slant rhyme multi recheck it
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-02 19:10:05 
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10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-02 19:12:32 
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Nice drop from you as usual... Keep it up..
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-02 19:20:00 
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shit was cool nice lil story here yo. ACish all day ma.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-02 19:36:19 
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This was dope, story was on point. The emotion was there, multies were aight.. a few iffy ones but overall a solid drop. My only advice is watch your wording. There's a few areas it could have been better. Keep doing your thing, this was def. worth the read.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-09-02 20:23:52 
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Dope
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-09-02 21:47:39 
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this was nice .. dope concept, good read too.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-02 21:59:41 
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AC'S.. dope cypher bro, turn that ish into a movie..
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-02 23:55:15 
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and u still managed to live thru all dat bullshit and talk about it? dats sum deep shit my guy
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-03 08:49:22 
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dope! keep on!
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-09-03 10:38:33 
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good shit i like ta read stories that are well put together
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-09-03 13:02:12 
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This is too real. Dime All Day!!!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-03 20:13:35 
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dope shit ...bro...i was late but it was worth a read...keep grindin
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-05 02:57:02 
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gs
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-05 17:07:16 
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yo,,cypher was on point fam...real talk..10;s all day
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-05 19:36:44 
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this was dope
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-05 21:39:39 
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damm this is sik i could rap the shit outa dat ..dime g good ish...return favour and check my track yo !
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-06 08:44:52 
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FUCKING DIME BRUV NICE READ
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-06 15:10:40 
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Good lil story. Had feeling n captured the readers attention so props on that.
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-09-06 17:24:54 
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Shiit, nice shit right here. All i recommend is that you fill out the entire thing but, it was a good story none the less!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-07 16:29:28 
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Dis is illest
Posted on: 2012-09-10 14:00:55 
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Awesome!!!!
Posted on: 2012-09-11 17:35:31 
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damn. that was very dope. keep it up
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-14 11:32:05 
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Damn bruh real nicely written. You painted a vivid ass picture n thats hard to do without actually hearing you spit it. Dime piece fosho.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-09-22 17:06:21 
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