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This is part 1 part 2 will be released soon so do not vote yet as it was to long to release in 1 package.
Posted on: 2012-08-24 03:59:47 
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fuck bro u keep getting better with each one nice song bro!! u should record ur songs
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-08-24 19:27:11 
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I am working on getting a mic.
Posted on: 2012-08-24 20:08:28 
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gs
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-08-26 04:38:47 
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I rarely have much to say about cyphers cuz its not my cup of codeine to be speaking on but there were many flaws here such as the concepts and your wording and also you need better multies... 1 and 2 syllable multies should not be in any verse here on letsbeef... The concepts here show that your young and the way you worded shit also shows your young so work on creativity cuz a lot of cyphers lack that... I'll still give you a generous rating due to it being a 64....
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2012-08-26 10:25:11 
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I actually was not aware i used any multi's i was just switching what i was rhyming, between lines.
Posted on: 2012-08-26 14:08:32 
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But, i do accept what you are saying. I will indeed work on it. As critizism helo everybody get better.
Posted on: 2012-08-26 14:14:18 
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Nice Delivery and nicely worded bro...
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2012-08-26 16:54:26 
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