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nice rhymes bro!!! keep up the good work
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-08-15 18:57:00 
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Thanks bro.
Posted on: 2012-08-15 18:58:40 
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i see you, keep it up,
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-08-15 21:01:22 
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Keep it up.
Posted on: 2012-08-16 05:42:08 
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Decent verse. A little off in spaces, but I thought it held flashes. The last one felt a little tighter on flow n rhyming. I like the concept a lot though. Join the say no to slash (/) campaign. just pace flow with comma's and everything will read better. Appreciate letting me see this. Good work.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-08-17 06:38:52 
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LOL @ the "disguised as Lloyd Banks" line.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-08-23 16:08:54 
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