Okay.. yo, When times get cold & you hear the ticking of a clock that's when you need to remain bold & keep kicking to the top because life's a long road but eventually it stops so go & go till yo body folds & your knees are locked!! ^^ That There Was Pretty Solid. I Felt You Sort Of Strayed Off Topic For A Minute There. But You're 10x Better Than You Were Like 3 Months Ago... I Felt The Cyph Was Nice But If You Was To Compare The Latter End Of It To The Starting Bars. Then It Had Far More Potential. Honest Rate
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-06-04 17:15:31

-You definatly Came hard In This One But From Reading Some Of Your Other bars You've Definatly Came harder Before But Still, Impressed? I Am. Good Shit My G. Big 8's On it!
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-06-04 18:20:05

it's good to see some real shit. Good job man.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-06-04 18:45:36

Fixed the first bar up like I told you and it came off way nicer. The rest of the verse didn't really match though. Like Xplissit said, strayed from topic a bit. The feel I had on the first bar was completely different than the rest... I don't know. Just seems the first bar was real deep thought while the rest was just simple thought but real. Still nice though. Giving it an honest 8.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-06-04 18:53:45

Yessir^ I was all for writing the first bar then I sorta got bored with it. I hear ya'll. thanks for the feed.

Posted on: 2012-06-04 18:55:35

Sick bars fam , sum real nice concepts and lyrics homie never disapoints... keep grindin pimp...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-04 18:59:36

I dont ever say too much on cyphers cuz it aint my cup of codeine but these were some pretty nice bars... There some shit that can be used in real life that you put into these bars... Good shit..
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-04 19:32:40

Thanks homies.

Posted on: 2012-06-05 00:23:11

nice cypher fam. real shit, ClaSSick!
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-06-05 16:10:53

Shit was real, wish you would've kept more complex rhyme schemes, due to my preferences. But a nice read.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-06-05 19:20:58

Pretty Nice Piece Here Keep It Up Good Read Fam
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-06-05 19:36:18

good drop bruh ...true shit...
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-06-05 22:39:19

so dope
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-05 22:47:10

Nice dude. Good read, Keep it up
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-06-07 22:20:32

sickness drop
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-06-08 02:55:03

http://www.letsbeef. com/cypher_details.p hp?section=tb&id=585 01
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-08 10:32:41

10 Dope
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-08 23:33:07

there thats more like a MV cypher - on sum real shit - 9
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-06-09 02:51:30

classick!!!!!!!!! u switched it up a bit,but still was mad nice. props fam.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-06-09 16:04:30

good drop, nice bars fams
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-06-09 17:36:55

Dope drop!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-21 17:30:04

Fairly nice verse, but I agree with the others that if you had stuck to one mindset from the get go, this had the potential to be fire. I liked the read, just thought it should have gone more with the first bar.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-08-27 21:10:17

Ayyyeeeee, This came off niiiice, Some minor siii that really cuda turned this bitch out...but G'shii overall.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-08-30 10:02:10

pretty good shit here... kinda hopped off topic but i can dig it
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2012-09-26 15:42:35