My first solo drop... Quick little writing.
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Posted on: 2012-04-16 18:16:20

Thanks for the read.
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Posted on: 2012-04-16 19:03:13

thats some nice shit here...dimes
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Posted on: 2012-04-16 19:31:07

GS
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Posted on: 2012-04-16 21:01:16

Aight i think you started a lil slow but i could tell that you were building a story then the second half you pick it all up & the story was pretty dope. I liked it all but imo the end/2nd half is the strong point. props g.. keep writing.
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Posted on: 2012-04-16 23:50:34

nice drop
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Posted on: 2012-04-17 05:10:08

good drop here book, real solid, sorta strayed away from the topic at times, but overall solid drop.
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Posted on: 2012-04-17 12:42:42

@Erupt that was sort of the point. Psychotic rant... Gets easily distracted by things then suddenly pulls himself back into what is important.
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Posted on: 2012-04-17 19:36:12

Good Ish.
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Posted on: 2012-06-14 20:39:24

10
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Posted on: 2012-07-26 20:31:16