Deep homie deep
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-12 19:37:04

Damn you have a great amount of skill when it comes to writing thats all i can say. Im not even going to break down flaws of it because they were little and imo this is dope. Keeping them in mind tho im throwin you a 9, stay up. Def keep writing.. the emotion was crazy and some really good rhyming going on, props. I def would read the rest of this so throw the link on my page w.e and i'll hit it up.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-02-12 19:53:09

nice shit
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-02-12 20:04:16

good stuff man
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-02-12 20:53:16

I like the content, lines are sometimes a bit longer throwing flow off a bit... However, if this is just a text piece not meant for audio then that's fine. I like it keep up the good work. Don't know why you send it to me though, since I've never spoken to you. Anyways keep writing
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-02-12 21:10:50

im comiing back to read again!!! dope!!!
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-02-12 21:19:30

AHAH PRITTY GOOD STUFF LIKE A STORIE KINDA THING YA I WAS FEELING IT YUP YUP DROPIN A 10 ON DIS BITCH
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-12 22:50:58

thats wazzup
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-02-12 22:55:03

fukin dope bro thtsom real shit bro
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-02-13 02:01:15

dimed it to me.....original concept well written and flowed nice. dope drop homie keep grindin
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-13 03:37:57

Dimez, the flow was well kept and the multis were good
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-13 04:06:36

you never disappiont me..10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-13 08:40:53

good shit homie
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2012-02-13 10:35:11

NICE
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-13 22:55:14

Other than the long lines this was good, well constructed.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2012-02-14 06:52:26

this was real emotional. flow was on point and multis were nice. i like the councillor theme surrounding the rhymes to man. dimed cuzin.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-14 07:30:35

gs
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-14 16:09:58

10 Dope And MeaningFul
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-14 18:27:51

cool tight lyrics bro...keep workin
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-02-15 10:06:04

damn- love the back and forth banter- dope as always chica
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-15 17:06:50

the content was somewhat nice, but what impressed me was the structure...creative !
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-02-16 11:14:46

real shit. dope.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-19 11:41:36

WOW!! This is pure skill! Never seen anyone write like you! The content is deep, but the structure and all, daamn!! Nice work (Y)
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-19 16:35:43

Ill have to cosign with MadVerbs on this one . you had real nice material in here man and I aint even swaying . was a long read but was worth it , I always enjoy your cyphers bro but , Im telling you . go get a fuckin mic and start killing the tracks fam! 10 - Amazing!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-19 16:54:57

good shit homie
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-02-19 16:58:00

MASTER MIND!!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-20 22:19:17

MASTER MIND! layout!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-20 22:19:18

good shit homie, LOONEY TUNEZ
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-21 18:33:43

was a wonderful read and without a doubt the best sad story I have heard in 2012! need more battles from you lady! Yeah this here stuck in my head for a while but it's cool though I can live with it. This made me ponder a lot ya know so yeah I rated by your complexity in it and there you go!!!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-21 18:49:31

Dope concept how you intergrated everything together. Yep, another thing I get. Wonder how I haven't read your shit before. Props.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-08-22 22:14:13

you really poured your heart out on this.. this some real shit. real talk...10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-08-26 18:16:22