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Dope cypher.. I liked the female and male shit.. It was an overall good cypher... Nice multies and great concept.. Keep up the dope cyphers...
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 15:05:58 
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that was dope the male/female concept is tight and the whole thing flowed smoothly. you write some deep cyphers keep writin and elevatin each one keeps gettin better. much respect
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 15:14:18 
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sum real shit storys are s dope concept an the touch u gave to it making a descriptive story an the way it was delivered made it a 10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 16:01:19 
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What the fuck just happened? I dunno who the hell you are but you just dropped a fuckin classick fam! Jesus mother that was a hot ass drop. You link me any more you make. 10's a must.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 16:19:14 
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whoa whoa whoa your Sub123??? Babe you elevated CRAZY! Fuck damn haha. Holla.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 16:20:44 
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yup thats me!
Posted on: 2012-01-02 16:22:47 
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WHAT THE FUCK BRO... Who the hell are you... MAN no one knows who the fuck you are but this cypher is one of the best 64s Ive read. Props send me a friend request
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 16:29:12 
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this was crazy.. one of the best ive read keep it up. some dope rhymes and story telling was impressive. i liked your bars about visiting dads in the state prison you killed that. ended with a bang and i felt your emotion thru out the whole piece. you delivered it good, flow was hitting so it made it a easy piece to read, 64 was the perfect amount of lines and you evened them out great, much respect this deseveres #1 on the hotlist fuck what anyone says.. (even though i'd love for it to be my 32)... you earned it.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 16:32:19 
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OMG!! This is amazing!! Really liked the whole conversation thing! This is by far, the best cypher i've read!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 17:01:49 
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damn girl' yo what can i say lol you had this in bag the min i read the first few sentences' loving the story from begining to end and how you managed to bring in topics from all corners while maintaining its main title concept' but yeah overall yo amazing cypher famms amazing.
its a (masters state of mind) very nice good shit.......
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 18:07:08 
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I really liked taht...Real shit, that should be a song....goo dhit yo...respect is due
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 18:32:54 
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That was fucking tight
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 19:03:23 
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VERY VERY GOOD YUP FEMALE MALE THING WAS DOPE AND I COULD SEE A LIL STORY IN MY HEAD FROM IT.. UMMM I RECKON U SHOULD RECORD THAT AND MAKE A SONG WITH IT PROBBERLY WOULD BE KOOL... BUT ANY MOTHERFUCKING WAY I LIKED IT ONE OF THE BETTER CHYPHERS IV READ..... KEEP DOING YAAAA THANG
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 19:58:24 
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no doubt one of the best ive read!!!
This has SUBSTANCE which is what izz missin in the art of muzic these days...
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 20:35:54 
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Co-sign RULE. I mean wtf this was craaaaaaazy. Concept was dope, rhyming scheme could have been improved but still the whole thing was deep, clever and emotional. Good job
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 20:41:01 
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Dope Story Fam Rated It A Nine
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-01-02 20:49:37 
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like how you run both sides of the story and shit. some of your lines sounded like they were a lil forced tho. still gonna give it a nine! good shizzle!
Posted on: 2012-01-02 21:08:58 
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YO I LIKE THE STORY BACK AND FORTH WITH IT WAS HOTT SOLID WRITTEN.STORY WAS DEF A BANGER TYPE-SOME DUDES GET TO OUTTA HAND-IF YOU WOULD DROPPED THIS AND MADE IT A WHOLE TRACK DEF WOULD BE CLOSE TO A CLASSIC-WRITTEN WISE ITS DEF A HIGH 9-I SAY THA CAUSE I KNO DUDES THAT A WRITE THERE ASS OFF BUT WHEN IT COMES TO SPITTING IT ITS A WHOLE DIFFRENT STORIE....THAS BEING REAL AND THAS ALL I KNO.....IM A DROP A 10 FOR THE FACT THE STORY LINES SOLIDNESS OF THE WRITTEN THE WELL THOUGH OUT SWITCH UPS FROM MALE TO FEMALE .....WAS A PLUS....EASYYY
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 21:27:12 
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ayo good shit. The back-n-forth parts was tight.
Posted on: 2012-01-02 21:31:12 
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10...Good Write All Around...I Don't Think Tha Flow Waz Broke....Cuz I Can Hear it being Sung Az A Trac....Many Catz Can't get Conceptz or Tha True Feel Of A Trac Cuz They Can't Write Music Or Don't Go On That Deep Level...Cuz U Add A Hook In Here..and Thiz would be A Deep..Dope & Real Trac...Good Work Your An Awesome Writer!!!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 21:44:03 
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nice classick shit dropped, crzy concept n sick setup to express da topic, keep it up....and def co-sign fuel... get into topical
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-02 22:37:47 
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damn dude very creative ! the rhyme scheme used was perfect with the vocabulary for what your were expressing
; you already kno wut it is fam 10!!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-03 00:13:14 
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nice bro
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-01-03 05:07:50 
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i love hows it a conversation...u really feel whats going on...story was good...good multis and great shit overall
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-03 07:50:32 
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Nothing to say that hasnt already been said
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-03 07:58:27 
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great job
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-03 16:46:48 
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haha nice
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-03 18:56:42 
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Ill creativity here!..Real nice bars my friend keep at it. This is true hip hop, being urself and going with what you wanna do and it it sick!..Good shit..emcees take notice and stop tryna be who ya aint. Respect!..
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-03 19:49:11 
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10 Doped should be a audio
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-03 20:03:34 
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I Like The Concept; Nice Read Too; Fizzed Through It Like It Was A 32. Didn't Like The Ending; Too Dramatic As There Seemingly Is No Outstanding Built Up
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-01-03 21:56:02 
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64 lines, 64 fire, and each verse speaks for itself. its hot!!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-03 23:28:40 
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goood shit brah...mad deep....feelin it...keep it going fam
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-04 02:05:34 
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Very lyrical ...can't wait to listen in an audio..
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-04 02:22:24 
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god damn this shit is fire!!! great read love the story line, endin was ILL 10!!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-04 11:50:30 
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I read it when you asked me to the first time, I just didnt think my comment mattered after i saw these... lol. Phenomenal to say the least. Nice drop.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-04 12:05:43 
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gs
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-04 14:30:45 
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good shit fam
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-04 15:02:16 
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good one!
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2012-01-04 21:17:33 
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wpw styraight 10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-05 00:46:32 
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WOW...JUST WOW.DOPE DIMED.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-07 15:39:45 
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better then trapped in the closet
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-08 21:23:36 
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WOW.. haha everyone else has already said it.. but this shit was amazing as fuck. 10 easily! You ever read something else somebody else wrote, and you were jealous cause you didn't write it?.. That's me right now, haha.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-09 16:04:28 
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wow...good stuff here...u should recording this with somone and put it on youtube or something so i can listen to it haha
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-11 07:54:35 
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This was a dope read, i thought at first, fuck this is gonna take a minute to read through but after the first few parts i was consumed. Ez Dime on this homie dope cyph.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-11 12:03:20 
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good one
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-01-14 06:00:42 
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cosigh slypro, defo one of the best ive ever read, sorry for the late rate man 10z FOUNDATION
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-01-18 11:51:31 
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dimed.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-06-14 12:37:21 
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was ok
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2012-06-14 20:25:10 
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really interesting read.. topic and the whole conversation in a rap. great stuff
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-08-26 18:06:18 
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