My Homies Mom Dies, True Shit So Feedback Is Way Appreciated

Posted on: 2011-12-11 20:16:58

some dope rhymes.... but i really liked the subject/deepness of the cypher, good shit ...bro Ez 10...

Posted on: 2011-12-11 20:24:07

some dope rhymes.... but i rewally like the subject/deepness of the cypher.... good shit bro Ez 10

Posted on: 2011-12-11 20:24:43

These are always good concepts to touch on cuz no one else does it that much... All of it was put together well i dont see any flaws mainly cuz of the subject... Overall good drop...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-11 21:33:27

Amazing cypher I'm very sorry to hear about your loss it's hard getting over a lost one but remember she's looking down on both of u so make her proud. 10 without a doubt
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-11 21:57:50

R.I.P bro i feel ya pain bro.. God bless
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-11 22:17:41

Deep lyrics homie, always heart felt- good drop- Sry for tha loss- i know its rough- i went through one last christmas- u got my prayers homie-
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-11 22:27:49

Respect To All You, No Doubt Thanks

Posted on: 2011-12-11 22:40:31

hearty ish b ....put it on audio!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-12 00:06:46

Real nice man you needa purchase a mic an get tracks grinding for real this would be heavy track material .. you delivered it well an structure was on point an some real nice emotion in it .. there were some bars that were meeh. but i aint hating man RIP to ya hommies mother . Pass the dime bag
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-12 00:15:52

I can feel allota emotions brah..but was kinda basic nahmean..but you should definitely record this track fam..fa real...dope shit...
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-12-12 01:51:29

feelings are wat make a song. ^ ace
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2011-12-12 03:08:42

deep shit fam, i feel you on that lost love shit, like when i lost my pen, i was eating chocolate and watching soap operas nonstop, just crying man, deep ass shit right here, lol
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-12-12 04:10:56

best way to shed a tear is bleeding through the ink.. gs keep it up,its deep no doubt bout that
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-12 05:41:33

i cant rate it lower than 10...not on skill but on the topic...im sorry.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-12 11:39:36

dope drop on some real shit
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-12 13:44:25

Really good piece man, you could feel strong emotion in this. Definitely a tear jerker, and I'm sorry for you and your friends loss.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-12 14:37:17

sick ryhmes
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-12-12 16:28:24

good drop man , stay strong you and your boi ,deep lyrics fam~ dimed
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-12 16:34:47

this is real deep, has dat poetic feel to it...i wuld to love to see u get more creative wit meta's which makes it more impressive based on da content but overall solid shit...and R.I.P
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-12-12 17:49:45

deep deep shit... i agree with v3numb... dime drop...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-13 04:17:13

Dam nice shit
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-13 19:07:40

very sharp homey;;
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-15 01:08:26

Nice work man, emotion is a powerful thing in rap.. and you just proved it. Mad respect.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-16 07:18:03

Nice drop Homie... Nothing like rhyming from the heart! R.I.P. thoughts with you and your Homie
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-16 07:47:07

daz deep G.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-12-16 09:06:31

deep shit dawg!!! dime all the way...and i know how u feel cause my mom died when i was 12 so i can relate this shit
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-16 09:30:51

gs
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-16 17:40:41

Sorry 2 hear bout u and you'r friends loss. keep yah head up soldier., I rated this cypher a 10 it hit me in d heart n i really felt d emotional compassion, this iz real
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-16 18:45:47

I could feel all of the emotion in this one DIMED!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-21 04:35:25

...read that before but my internet froze and couldn't rate it. Nice storyline, emotion kept coming out R.I.P to ur homie's mom fam. As swavy said, the rhyme scheme was complex but you got the story writting. If you could get your thinking a tiny bit more complex and add meta's and other shit to ur stories then shit'll be dope as fuck.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-01-13 10:06:30

wasn't complex*
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-01-13 10:06:59

Damn bro...my condolences to your homie first of all. You've damn near perfected the art of relating emotional content into rhyme without being corny or forced... which isn't an easy task. SWAVY said something about using a wider range of metaphors...I think that would just add some depth which is always good. Definitely Dimed.... keep it up.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-01-25 03:40:23

good shit man nice cypher...

Posted on: 2012-02-01 07:25:04

gs
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-08 13:25:36

heartfelt. best thing to do behind those situations. i enjoyed the content and appreciated the message. pZz
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-02-23 23:32:59

this was an entertaining read homie
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-02-24 15:20:00

Solid 9 my dude, the depth was exhilerating...Didnt dime it ONLY because i would have liked to seen a little more complexity thrown into the mix...Overall superb job
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-02-24 15:24:13

this is one of those times where I dont have a lot to say, good job.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-04-14 03:14:09

The emotion alone was dope yo, good shitt
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-04-16 02:19:50

Really dope, felt the emotion put into this. Good shit fam.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-04-18 17:26:47

good flow...& awesome delivery of tha subject....Fuck all tha criticism about Meta's & all that...When I hear those commentz...it makez me feel like mofukaz can't set they bitch ass pride away for a moment or their ignorance...& or thinkin every person writin should be tha same az tah what they feel or like....CAN YOU IMAGINE A WORLD WIT NO DIVERSITY Or Where everyone's a clone & you see tha same thingz non stop day after day?? thatz why tha bezt rapperz aren't on THA radio blastin...their tha stars on tha underground..Wit tha deepest messages & reachin their Fewer amount of Fanz & truly makin an impact on peoplez Livez in a deeper & richer way....So on that NOTE....NICE WORK BROTHA & KEEP DOIN YUR THING!!! & PRAYERZ FO U & YA FAM....& R.I.P Tah Someone you & ya Boy Really LOVED!!! RESPECT MV....& If I could give thiz mo then a 10 I would.. So 10 tah tha MAX Homie!!!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-09 03:33:48

damn..deep shit fam...u should record this one...good shit
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-07-13 20:55:37

Deep Respect on this. Trust me, I know the feelings well.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-07-19 23:11:44

10

Posted on: 2012-07-20 17:07:35

nice shit man. I think cats can relate to this one.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-09-01 18:22:58

powerfull stuff man, dimed .not much more i can say
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-09-03 17:52:01

its definitely more of a spoken word/poem than anything else...regardless this is deep and heartfelt...you did a great job on the imagery...couple mechanical flaws here and there, but nothing that takes away from this piece as a whole...great job man and stay up
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-09-05 16:27:33

10. this is deep, real deep. so much better than the bs that most rappers talk about. nice work
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-10-12 17:40:50

I do not, know if this is true.. But, 10 for originality bro. Good work.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-11-01 04:31:51

that's some real shit right there huh? type of shit you hope a person can see from where ever they're resting. keep doing this shit man, whenever i get tired of reading raps about how many jewels ppl got in their necklace, i'll come to you to read some real shit
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-12-13 23:45:55

Death is a fuckin bitch, but at least you got the memories of good times to keep with u. Good raw emotion, it made this very good to relate to. RIP
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-31 15:38:52

deep shit, plus i know what its like to lose a loved one R.I.P to moms
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-02-05 20:49:00

too real...been there..
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-03-07 23:52:44

good shit bro... i can relate losing one of my parents.. suddenly... nice as part of a familys last words of remembrance
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-03-08 00:29:57

Deep as hell. hella of a subject and enjoyed it. Keep up the amazing work
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-03-08 01:15:17

Deep lyrics and some dope rhymes, good shit keep it up.

Posted on: 2013-03-08 14:20:23

Good shit, Deep subject and i felt it, at first it came off as really basic but the more you read it was actually a really good drop. Ez 10 head up
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2014-12-09 22:44:43