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"Jay Z... Lost Ones"

-RED-BARON-

Everyday of my LIFE, When I get the feeling is RIGHT, I just pick up the pen and WRITE what I think is RIGHT because what's wrong isn't even an OPTION, because I'm feeling like Rocky the way I'm BOXING-IN, it's crazy the way my success came from LOTS-OF-SIN, making fella's surrounding me NAUSEOUS-AGAIN, because sometimes I'm blind and lose sight of the HURTING, when I can't face reality I just close the CURTAIN, they say the right beat can bring out the real side of a PERSON, so I hold my breathe until I reached the SURFACE, and at the end of it all I look back on life it was all WORTH-IT, cuz way before and even after your PURCHASE, my life is tragic in search of bringing words a whole new PURPOSE, because this music I can't SLEEP-ON-IT, I just, KEEP-ON-IT, conveying lyrics that evoke powerful EMOTIONS, a strong spirit can quote for hours without NOTION the ups and downs like the waves of the OCEAN, but I only stay level because I KNOW-THIS, and know that life is so precious I had a best-FRIEND just DIE, I only saw him last week returning his phone at the END of his BED-SIDE, but now I'm at his funeral asking myself IS-THIS-LIFE? if I had one wish I'd bring him back and we'd SWITCH-LIVES, cuz I'm already dead with the CURSE; to tell ME, HE, Already had his last BREATHE on this EARTH, damn... I can't GRASP-IT, I'm reminded each and everyday of YOUR-ABSENCE, trying to find every-way to GET-PAST-IT, but I can't do it and it EATS-AT-ME, Constantly Replaying back time PIECE-BY-PIECE, so I just keep my head up and pray for better days TO-COME, cuz when it's all lay-ed out in front of you, theres so many ways TO-RUN, so I'm gonna say it; as it; is; no effort gets no reward so I lost the RELATIONSHIP, I can still smell her scent and kiss, I miss the TASTE-OF-IT, I threw what we had down the gutter so I took all the memories and ERASED-OF-IT, cuz the pain's too deep everyday just FACING-IT, it's un-imaginable to take a picture-perfect love and just WASTE-OF-IT, now looking in the mirror MAKES-ME-SICK, I still ache when I get reminded of all the GOOD-TIMES, but creeps-in is all the memories when she used to PUSH-MINE, so arguing developed to a fight that took ALL-NIGHT, to RESOLVE and I'm not saying I'm right; I'm not saying I'm WRONG, but all-in-all put the fighting ASIDE, because you'll miss a bigger picture provided by the GIFT-OF-SIGHT, all that fussing over nothing sparks a SWITCH-IN-LIFE.. I'm ITCHING-FOR-LIFE because I'm 22 but I feel like I'm 50...GREAT, so when I'm 32 I'll really feel like I'm 68.. 







November 2011

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Cypher started: November 14^th 2011 at 04:00

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Sir Dopadamus	great body of work...very readable...enjoyed it throughout...read this good piece of work while listenin to jay z's lost ones beat...good shit...loved the different elements of emotions put in this...it doesnt feel like a sob story or whoaless me type cyph...impressive... Letsbeef on the text side its lookin good becuz of guys like you on here...keep it up and never give up on yourself..your bestfriend would'nt want you to give up on yourself...i can relate to your cypher...10 Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-11-14 04:48:00
Letum <Turnbull AC's>	nice read. ^nicely said sir dop Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-11-14 04:53:43
《11:11》 <《11:11》>	Gave it 10 fam u neva holla atcha boy...anyhow Bro U wrote that to Jay z beat or what confused by the name? Hit me up Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-11-14 06:20:39
nine7eight <Turnbull AC's>	some deep shit bro, nice read deff. 10 Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-11-14 11:21:29
IV <Red Ribbon Army>	This was nice, really emotional. Nice ending and it progressed nicely all the way through. I know in battles you capitalise punches and rhymes/multies etc, but with pieces like this it's best not to because when you read it you subconsciously stop the flow in your head. I hope you know what i mean by that, and it did get a lot better from about the half way point so good job. You should look into the 'topical lounge' and try some topicals (i don't know if you've done them before sorry) and also paste this into the writers block lounge for more feedback :) Another thing i'd say is this would work really really nicely on a track. Lyrically it's not perfect but i'll give you a high rating because of the emotion and the fact it would translate well to a track. Don't give up on this you've got real potential, well done Rated: 8 Posted on: 2011-11-14 11:38:38
happynightmare	Great job bro felt like this before many-a-times really speakss to the reader...10 Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-11-14 12:04:37
Capitalist	Very nice read. Dimed. Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-11-14 13:05:14
Apollyon <Turnbull AC's>	This was cool real shit and theres alot too... Good read.... Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-11-14 13:53:39
Erupt da Monsta <Legion of Doom>	my nigga verity pretty much summed it up, wasnt perfect but i could feel the emotion in this one brah, keep up the work, work on addin in a lil better multi set and youll be in there like swim wear. Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-11-14 15:27:15
-RED-BARON-	thanks for the constructive criticism everybody, it will help become the better writer I want to become one day Posted on: 2011-11-14 15:50:49
-RED-BARON-	help me become*, lmao it's too early I just woke Posted on: 2011-11-14 15:52:45
Queen Ddizzle <Hip Hop Disciples>	HOT SHIT FAM Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-11-14 21:28:26
-RED-BARON-	and yeah ^^ i wrote it to the instrumental Posted on: 2011-11-15 04:38:04
-RED-BARON-	lol Posted on: 2011-11-15 04:38:35
-RED-BARON-	check out Lost Ones Part 2 too Posted on: 2011-11-15 04:39:38
ItsNaturill	dope drop - the wordin could do w/ a bit tightenin up high 8 Rated: 8 Posted on: 2011-11-15 11:29:31
Eye G <GOoN.ZOo>	N!ce SHit fam..keep it up/.. > Rated: 8 Posted on: 2011-11-16 03:27:09