fill ya box bro

Posted on: 2011-11-01 09:48:54

Fill your box. You don't have bad ideas but when it comes to standing out your rhymes, only stand out the words that do rhyme.. Creative thoughts. 8 from me, if it were a 16.. I would toss a 9 probably.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2011-11-01 15:12:30

Pretty much what Stiig said: try and fill the box it makes it a more worth while read (esp. on an 8 liner) and highlight the external rhymes in CAPS eg. RAW-NEVER-COOKED and SAW-NEVER-LOOKED, it makes it easy to follow so people can see your flow better. You had some great lines though! I'd have loved to have read more but it ended too soon! Hit me up when you've dropped summit longer! LAS1
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2011-11-01 15:20:34

Exactly what the last 3 said fill in your box and cap your rhymes other then that nice drop...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-11-01 19:14:37

Check this out... http://www.letsbeef. com/cypher_details.p hp?section=tb&id=549 86
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-11-01 19:18:25

Thanks, I'll try to extend it as soon as possible...

Posted on: 2011-11-02 13:55:46

ProlificSpitter, the link you pasted is not working..

Posted on: 2011-11-02 14:03:45

fill ur box up, but great ammo!
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2011-11-02 21:48:10

gs
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-11-02 21:52:47

nice
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-11-04 00:13:24

10 DOPED And SICK
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-11-04 00:16:41

hmmm.
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2011-11-20 12:09:41