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Cold steele poets
Posted on: 2011-05-24 14:26:38 
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this is a legit dime.. the concepts were thoughtful, flow and multies were on point with variations, and it even had a dope chorus. Lot's of respect Ren, this is tight shit man. Waxxplissit. ColdPoets.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-24 14:34:30 
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dimer, it was a really dope concept, nice emotion in it too, plus good flow n rhymes
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-24 14:39:02 
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agree wit most of both^ Multies need a lil work tho, dime tossed.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-24 14:46:52 
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It was alright, it didn't catch my attention to much. but overall it was a good read.
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2011-05-24 15:01:44 
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very very nicely done...simple yet complex - meaning the complexity of the structure and set-up might not be there, but the complexity of the concepts sure are...very deep man...id love to hear this to a beat...keep doing your thing and hit me with your next shit
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-24 15:02:01 
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Dime famo- nive drop-
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-24 15:06:57 
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u never gave me 10...i aint gonna give u too :p...lol 10 decent shit
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-24 15:12:23 
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nice drop! the flow was on point, the deepness was hot, no forced rhymes/lines! respect!
cold poets!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-24 15:23:33 
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this sht is beast n on fire , keep thsi hot sht comin
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-24 15:45:28 
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Nice
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-24 15:52:34 
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Nice
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-24 15:52:34 
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Most of your multies don't match up, syllable wise or just not rhyming, but otherwise still dope.
Just some examples:
SOMETHI NG BETTER/INSIDE YOUR SWEATER/THAT LIES ARE BETTER
HADN'T WE TO STRUGGLE/BODIES IN THE RUBBLE
You know? If you cap it, make it rhyme homie. Keep elevating. Tossin' a dime here. Respect.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-25 01:42:22 
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nice drop
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-05-26 02:00:55 
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that was hard G! hit them multis on point, every time. sick drop!
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-05-30 19:22:52 
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dymes
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-06-09 16:53:53 
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10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-07-06 19:17:08 
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