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tight sht man. uer word play was good and had some nice punches
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-22 15:56:14 
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pretty dope try to work on your multis more, add some more better concepts and syllabe count! dope as but!
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2011-05-22 19:50:48 
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dymes
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-22 19:53:21 
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multies need work but its still fly..
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2011-05-27 01:40:54 
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preciate the feedback lets me know what i need to work on
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-05-27 11:58:59 
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work on cleaning up those multi syllable rhymes... but good stuff otherwise.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-06-02 01:18:44 
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cool
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-10-26 23:07:21 
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