Felt this. Would be real nice over a light piano type beat. Nah mean?
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-04 11:31:50

Yea i feel u good looks, im workin on a custom beat for this... Thnx for the Rate...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-04 11:33:16

lol...recently has happened to me..but the other way around...i dumbed the bitch and dont give a fuck about her..i fucks wit it
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-04 11:40:35

Hmm Really Good Actually
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-04 13:01:08

*DIME* Damn Homie You got Deep in this Fam! Can't say I feel your pain, but from reading ya cypher I got an idea of ya struggles!!! "YNS" *DIME*
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-04 14:15:54

LISTEN, i like how you went from battle style and managed to go deep with it, but im not into the girly songs yo... sooo
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2011-04-04 14:47:09

Nice cypher homie, I could imagine this bein made into a track.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-04 15:26:36

very nice drop fam def showing some range of talent...keep it up

Posted on: 2011-04-05 11:40:49

my bad lol

Posted on: 2011-04-05 11:43:01

haha... still doin it big huh? imma shoot this to ma lady friend. Real shi tho
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-05 11:46:21

Very nice man. I felt this one. Nothin better than story laid out in front of you that you can relate to. Good shit brother. Keep it up.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-05 12:04:31

shits REAL!
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2011-04-05 12:37:50

Nice bar structure...pretty well put together and the lyrics were nice as well
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-05 12:46:50

Co-Sign with mani
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-05 13:12:45

Damn Man..If That B real Sorry Homie Forreal..This Dat real Life Music I Like Send Me When Done I would love to hear it...nice man
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-05 13:20:20

Some nice bars here, dope concept.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-05 13:28:58

Good looks on the rates and feed...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-05 14:03:31

i dont know what to say thats some real shit shouldnt even be up here i woulda kept it to myself until i layed it down
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-05 14:14:04

Dope. Real talk, enjoy the deep shit...
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-05 15:22:30

its nice and deep. no hate but i dont know what your talking about. thats just me
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2011-04-05 15:25:56

Nice shit. Relatable. Deep.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-05 15:32:11

Wow this is real good.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-05 16:23:27

Short, meaning full nice, nice use of multies,i enjoyed it, you could probably record this
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-05 19:42:37

not bad my dude. i can digg this.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-06 09:34:32

this shit is lightyears ahead of ya old shits...this was dope son
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-06 14:40:45

dude this was prob the best i heard from ya , nice concepts /strucure everything dime fo sho props
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-06 16:43:46

stayed on topic, spice up the diction a lil, nice concept
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-06 19:30:27

SHIT WAS FLY, LIKE THE FLOW AND TOPIC, WORDPLAY WAS THERE AND EASY TO READ, KEEP PUSHING...
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-07 10:42:08

10!! Dope lines need to hear this on a beat!!!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-11 11:17:51

Okay, I see you got a soft side nigga. Lol but foreal this was nice...mushy ass nigga
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-15 19:38:22

snap fam 4 dat shit this getting a 10 iight my fam .. imma be doin a drop like this soon too haha and i feel like tellin kush that im ready for this marriage ause then pain i feel inside only she can understand it! /-So imma get high till i reach anotha Planet,that shit was siik man respect jed my bruv .. n keep ya head up son .. yu worth it cuzz
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-19 14:01:05

Nice concept...relevant too..last bar explained it...good shit..simple & effective..10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-27 11:29:12

Great read alot of emotion involved nice work
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-05-20 01:53:16