Amazing...Speechless . -Stu
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-06-30 01:47:24

the ryhme skeme in this shit was dope, funny thing is it flowed perfectly while keepin the same skeme.. A little insane in the brain but i'm gifted. Belitted & thanked for the greatness i'm spittin, a riddle exchanged for a grain of some wisdom, i'm killin these lames every day with my writtens...I've crippled the ranks of Al-Qaeda's positions. A lyrical tank that remains non-forgiving. I was fly... til I've driven a plane & it banged into buildings.. shit, Call me Hussein if I fit the description. I'm not a farmer, but I stay with some "chickens" that give me the brains of an asian physician. smh hoodrich.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-06-30 01:48:21

shit, Call me Hussein if I fit the description. I'm not a farmer, but I stay with some "chickens" that give me the brains of an asian physician. You pitiful lames always hate on a nigga, yet still are amazed I contain my condition.. *hits his L...* ...If you could live in a day of a king would you live it? I can never explain all the pain that i'm feeling. My vision aint fame its to change up my living. Example; for dinner a steak with a maid in my kitchen. & a butler to pick up my plate when I say that i'm finished. I'm a little ashamed of the things that I witnessed, invisible reigns cause a strain on my tendons. We're all puppets...we're just living the way that THEY tell you to live it. A business gets paid & don't help in our districts. For minimal pay we just help with the dishes, instead of explaining whats dealt in our system. They're hella afraid to attempt a revision, when a president say all this bleh..do you listen? You ever just thinking "whats hell & what isn't?"...While these cities are plagued in a deadly condition, kids get in to gangs for respect & for bitches, & are dead the next day or instead end up missing. Is this really just fake? Someone tell me you're kidding. I'm dreaming. i gave this a 10 pulse really liked it specially We're all puppets...we're just living the way that THEY tell you to live it. A business gets paid & don't help in our districts. For minimal pay we just help with the dishes, instead of explaining whats dealt in our system. They're hella afraid to attempt a revision that waz ?? Perfectly said haha HUGE props ... ~10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-06-30 01:53:30

Thank you everyone

Posted on: 2010-06-30 02:25:16

Ily
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-06-30 03:22:17

one of the best pieces ive ever read on LB!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-06-30 11:37:05

10. The rhyme scheme was what made it that much better.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-06-30 12:08:07

ayo, this shit was dope as fuck... it flowed really nice, and the poetry connection is well emphasized, this shit is nasty...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-06-30 12:46:57

Dope Drop
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Posted on: 2010-06-30 23:07:49

Dimed it. Hell yeah, amazing story here, all true, I feel this, and amazing syllable placement, PERFECT, absolutely PERFECT my man!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2014-05-11 10:29:14

cool
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Posted on: 2014-05-11 20:12:15

Multis insane, but i was feelin the message more...nothing less than a dime. *Propz* ~1~
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2014-05-11 20:37:05

lame shit
Rated: 1

Posted on: 2014-05-12 08:55:23