situated next to a group of teenage girls in filthy pajamas all holding their THROAT-and-NECKS…to be contiued. ~removes headphones~
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 10:32:59

damn gotta give u a 10 fa real
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 10:57:25

dope shit fame...keep it real
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 11:31:47

dope, 10 fo sho, thinkin this would sound real good on some audio
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 11:42:02

That shit was raw fam straight up 10 all day... U def gota do a second part to this shit and explain further where it s that ur stuck that shit would be raw... NME/DPS
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 11:43:37

yea...Im definitely going to keep the story going...adds to the suspense.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 12:20:55

dimes for the good story man
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 12:55:22

Dropin Bombs... Shit Was Dope
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 16:47:50

Oh Yeah and i gave 10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 16:48:33

hmm... that was deep, happily rappin sad... thats the voice i hear... any writen words that can take u to a differnt place as a reader deserves a 10... i stand inspired ~KwZ~
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 17:23:25

WOW. That was an AWSOME READ i read it like 8 or nine times ill GIVE IT 1+9 i think you know what that = 10'z BABY!! peace out KEEP ME POSTED
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 17:34:39

DAMN! DIMED FAM!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 18:15:32

^ Is he gay?? but on the other hand I read it from top to bottom & it was worth it I feel it its a original nobody would think about this, multies was on point like chris paul man good drop 10, hit me up if you makin another one man.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 18:19:54

dope 10'z!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 18:21:14

My comment was aimed @ that my heart dude.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-06 18:23:39

GOOD SHIT
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2010-01-06 18:37:23

wow dude, that was way relevant to me, you gave me flashbacks of my LSD trips, sounds like weird dreams I've been having too, you done any Hallucinogens?, lol, neway dropping a 10 check out my "Blame the mainframe" cypher if you got time,
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-07 02:38:38

some real complex shit so far.. *continues reading* .. DOPE!! liked it man .. some dark yet intelligent shit.. 10's all day
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2010-01-07 06:51:41

poets on his own level right now and i dont know that many can touch him...multis were on point, very creative, nice flow to it...if this is the first of many my man, i would love to possibly hop on one...but keep them coimng
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-07 15:00:01

That was pure genius fam. This gotta be the best cypher i've read. Deep, sincere, and real. Hit me up when you drop the second installment homie. 10 all the way nothing but it. Mad respect bruh.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-07 16:35:37

abstract and beautiful. Nice piece. 10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-08 04:07:50

That shit was dope on da real, big dawg. Keep it up
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-08 08:00:17

Dime.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-08 12:43:29

see there's a difference between 'using big words' and knowing how to use them in context and correct diction.. always a dope vocab with sick concepts and over the top multi-rhymes...props dude Poet! 10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-09 17:39:39

the use of multies, flow and concept is immense. i read your work an feel a urgent need to improve my own haha. awesome stuff. your the sickest on LB , don't let nobody tell you otherwise man. lemme know when you drop the sequal man.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-09 18:01:41

Nice authentic Stuff; Hm Sickest? You're coming near it alright; Gd Shit
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-09 23:26:27

damn you come up with soon deep shit nyour chyfers are amazing
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-11 06:53:00

gotta say its movin fa sho yo homie hit me up to do a colab check some of my cyphers and you'll probly like the way i spitem get at me homie 10'z eazy
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-11 20:48:45

i give u a 100 dat shit was fire
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-18 14:40:02

Sickness.. 10.. Brining back the Rap roots Story Telling!!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-20 13:36:15

yo for real mad props on dis its mad dope an i cant wait for the 2nd part to drop
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-21 01:28:25

Illest cyph I've read in a long ass time....Very deep intelligent shit right chere....Lovin it frr real....DIZZIMES!!!! ~KiNg OUT~
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-24 10:17:47

Awesome
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-28 22:14:18

TIGHT
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-01-30 22:44:22

damn homie dimez fa show..........easy dimez.......you droppin some fuckin hot ass shit lately no doubt.......keep it up famz......peace.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-02-03 14:56:12

ill shit
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-02-06 19:16:51

niceee.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-02-07 05:06:33

10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-02-08 15:57:52

good cypher man
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-02-26 13:45:30

Dope shit fam! Props!
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2010-02-26 21:37:19

Hawwwt
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-03-14 13:33:36

rah full on siccness bruv props where props is due dude this verse is siccness, shit fact is fuck a TEN ima give ya's a TWENTY fo such dopeness. Peace...420
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-03-24 08:35:07

Dope ish duke
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2010-03-28 13:11:03

lmao nice
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2010-03-30 08:42:29

agree with all above. ez 10. nice man.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-04-19 16:03:28

ha, cool
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-04-19 17:13:10

gc
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2010-04-26 10:43:30

UM...

Posted on: 2010-05-29 02:12:25

that shit was nasty fam, u got this cypher shit figured out for real tho. ayo heres a challenge, write a cypher that means one thing when u read it forwards but then when u read it from the last line back to the first line it means different
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-06-14 09:32:34

dooooooooooope
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-12-26 17:09:44

Nice shit. Rhymes were generally on point, imagery was really nice. Story could have developed some, it was a nice description of a place but nothing really happened. Was also thrown off by the immidiate grammatical error in the first line but I'm picky about that shit. Overall pretty nice. I think there was some room for improvement, but I'mma let you hold this dime.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-06-27 13:49:30

Lol...Indeed fam, this drop was from 3yrs ago...shortly after I had joined LB...nothing really happened because I hadn't completed the story in it's entirety as of yet, hence the part 2 that's being created right now.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-06-27 13:55:59

Good stuff here, nothing like a true story rap
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-06-27 14:01:03