what u JOT IS IN DANGER cos when rev PLOTTIN THE PAPER you 'trippin w/ delivery' like im KNOCKIN A WAITER plus how you think you 'DROPPIN A PLAYER' when u can't even 'sound resistent' if your LOCKED IN THE CHAMBER (damn)/All this fucker does is PRESENTS US STATEMENTS cos the SECOND BARS AIM IN he'll be 'locked-w/-anguish' & 'loss of language' like DEMENTIA PATIENTS!/ You're not 'safe' if you PLACIN A LOCKET you don't have the BASIC OF KNOWLEDGE he'll be lookin to 'change his style' w/ some LACE IN HIS POCKET while i 'open n shut, money' w/o TAKING HIS WALLET/One listen of his spit it's irrelevant w/o premise like a CRANKY BITCH so your not 'armed' w/ MANLY SPITS so let me help you by 'cuttin off your fingers' for some HANDY TIPS!/ Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-14 02:32:41

One was too basic, it was freestyle quality lyrically. And clarity went down when he was trying to double time a lot. Winner took this with nicer bars, even tho delivery could be more aggressive, sounds like reading out loud. Voted: reVerberate / lynwood shame
Posted on: 2015-03-14 02:39:33

lol it was free it's all good Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-14 07:05:42

i'm diggin' on the winner's delivery. gb Voted: reVerberate / lynwood shame
Posted on: 2015-03-14 08:59:20

Good shit for both. Felt my winners written was better, while the loser had a better if flawed delivery. My winner, really needs to work on his energy with the delivery. Sounded like a read through. Don't make your written sound like a written. Needs to sound natural. Loser showed alot of potential for good delivery, and while I know he was going fast on purpose, it didnt sound comfortable, and many of the Bars on this one, felt like filler desighned for quick a quick spit. The punches were quick but lacked power. If Winner works on the delivery he will be pretty solid in Audio quick. TBH, this was really close. But after 3 listens, this is my Vote. GB fellas Voted: reVerberate / lynwood shame
Posted on: 2015-03-14 19:37:11