yo i'm a 12 yr old white kid/ in a tiny little suburb/ never fucked bitches/ thought it was absurd to puff herb/ then a friend lends me a copy of infinite/ eminem wrenchin the english language to match my inner sentiments/ rappin bout rippin ligaments/ fuck man, i was diggin it/ became a little less innocent/ found me some bitches/ got intimate/ tried some illegal stimulants/ whittled my reputation for being a little shit/ told my 7th grade teacher to sit on a dick/ so copyin a role model who aint wanna be a role model/ got me in trouble my moms couldn't talk me outta/ no doubt about it/ copying aint all it's cracked up to be/ so i adopted a new motto, fuck you, i do me/ true blue steez/ so groovy/ so my friends 14 and his dad's a mad alcoholic/ always drinkin cheap liquor on some calm shit/ till he got a few in him then he'd beat my friend for slippin the wrong sentence/ and my friend was in the courtroom when he was sentenced/ for drunk drivin/ duck jivin' some blue lights out on long island/ couldn't water this shit down if i was poseidon/ stayed beside him/ my buddy was crushed and those half empty bottles were callin/ him to drain em and to live up to his callin/ he went all in/ his liver screamin/ dude just stop it/ but he couldn't calm it/ paranoid schizo - drinkin 25 vodka and tonics/ so copyin a role model who shouldn'ta been a role model/ got him in trouble that the law got involved in/ copying aint all it's cracked up to be adopt my motto/ fuck it/ do you/ letcha crew see/ and if that crew weak/ let em swagger jack till they get they swagger back/ keep ya facts straight/ or stay mad trapped in a wack habitat/ ca use these copy pasters wastin the most important resource/ originality/ droppin photocopied shit with no remorse/ the only recourse/ divorce the thought that's what's in is what you should be/ clear yr own path/ with yr thoughts words or machete/ cause it's deadly to stagnate in that same old same old/ so be ready to elevate/ new game or game over/ gl Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-20 09:42:34

topical tournament - Copying somebody else Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-20 11:12:49

Good luck Kilgore. Topic: Copying Someone Else I'm sittin, sick of staring at this stupid blank page Letting flicks of frustration build into a faint rage Try to change ways of thinking, but the answer won't pop Smashing pressure in my head and the hammers don't stop This pop quiz off the top is looking totally foreign So crazy with stress, maybe I'll guess and hope for some fortune But what's wrote is important, scholarship on the line As a last resort; steal responses and call em mine I peek over shoulders, first set I see B A D Like fate spelling and telling the teacher what he may see The guilt hits like a ton of bricks, my stomach splits But I can't lose my college chances so nothing sticks Those bubbles turn black like holes sucking in my soul Ripping pieces of morality, tugging at the whole Who am I? If this wasn't do or die, I'd probably quit Can't coast off of my wit, these crimes I've got to commit So before I knew the task would begin I'm passing it in Packin the sin of what I did for class in my skin Next week, red cheeks, I'm embarrassed to see the scores Nervous too, salty sweat drips from greasy pores While others emit sleepy snores, I feel worthless Since at lecture's end the letters and grades will surface The whole place aversive, walls chipped off paint, ugly color Find next tiny desks - too small, tilt with weight, rusty covers And tubby others acting like chummy brothers, lame clowns Then suddenly I realize the test is there, face down I come crashing back to reality, I have to pass Flip it over, no score, just says 'See me after Class' And now I go there, so scared of the out come Can't believe I cheated got things so heated, how dumb Eye to eye, he's looking at me with a hard stare Gazing through deception, detection laying my heart bare Out of breath, I can't handle this amount of stress But I half-mumble 'You wanted to talk about the test?' He said 'Aced it, great job, all your hard work has paid off It's the best of days, let's build your resume and take off Since showing you surely understand how all these work I'm offering a paid position aiding in my research' Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-23 17:44:28

This is tough! Both did a nice job. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-23 20:27:29

yo, these was dope. More of a Cypher kinda rhyme i think from both. But definetly siick shit. Kilgore had some dope lines, i like his whole siick kinda old skool slim shady feel. Dono, on more of a deeper thought out flow process. Not really seeing the attacking method from either, but ya'all flow and word play make up for lack of beef. So FV in. Imma go wit Kil tho, seeing how he was a lil violent, and showed a lil bit of hatred towards whoever was to except the challenge. Dono u was on point dogg, ya'all both wld get the win if it was possible. Respect on both. Voted: emceekilgore / Dono
Posted on: 2013-07-23 20:49:30

Both of you had some dope material. Rhymes was nice, and the stories was well told. My winner got it based of a better overall performance imo, with a different approach to the topic, and stronger emotion and flow. But no one let down, this was impressive on both parts. Well done ya'll. Unfortunately I can't vote cuz I just joined Murda, but I jus realized this, and I'm keepin the expo. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-24 04:43:31

felt ones delivery and vocab, made their topic more interesting, stayed consistent, and relavent... til the end.. other was pretty tite as well, but topic wise, didnt really keep the central idea, kinda branched off into sub topics etc.. fairs in Voted: emceekilgore / Dono
Posted on: 2013-07-25 04:11:01

Darn Good Battle! Really almost too close to call. Hard choice. I wish I could give both yall the win. Maybe one edged it with approaching the topic more directly and with more disdain for copying? But the other finished stronger and was a bit more consistent… Got to vote…No H8. MAD RESPECT 2 BOTH! Voted: emceekilgore / Dono
Posted on: 2013-07-25 10:57:14

Both were really good here but one's flow and delivery got it for them. Voted: emceekilgore / Dono
Posted on: 2013-07-25 18:22:50

both were actually really good, ones vocab and consistant storyline got this for me tho, good shit to both Voted: emceekilgore / Dono
Posted on: 2013-07-25 20:34:16

Damn both dope, but one I was really feeling more tbh. Voted: emceekilgore / Dono
Posted on: 2013-07-26 18:21:22

Damn. Dono went hard. I liked kilgores verse but Dono was just on another level Voted: emceekilgore / Dono
Posted on: 2013-07-26 18:49:53

this was as close as a battle can get. killgore started on fire, i felt like he kinda went a lil off topic in the middle, they were great bars, and I see what you were trying to convey..but the bars leaned more towards the influence of others rather than the topic of copying.Dono did a great job of incorporating the core topic through story telling and vividly delivered bars. My reasoning for my vote -I felt like the winner had better delivery and topical content..but both did an amazing job Voted: emceekilgore / Dono
Posted on: 2013-07-28 02:15:07