Get ur writtens up! VICIOUS! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-27 17:54:45

I want this. Please no one take it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-27 18:52:07

Last word is phony. Sorry y'all Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-27 19:03:52

one spit had a little more smooth flow..both had kinda eh equal shots at one another. fv no h8 Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-27 19:17:09

lol fair in yo....noh8 here vb yall...gb Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-27 19:51:35

Tain - Ya Flow Is Beast My Dude, My Only Advice To Better Ya Next Battles Is That You Work On Ya Punches And Aim More Directly At Ya Opponents, Ya Verse Here Was More Of Like Tellin' Him How Better Than Him, You Are...Just Work On Having More Of A Battle Verse. Props On Ya Vocabs As Well. DaBuj - Ya Flow Was Ok, I Personally Wasn't Diggin' The Rhythm Of How Ya Bars Was Delivered...It Got A Lil Better Towards The End. As Far As Your Bars, It Was Pretty Basic, I Would Work On Bettering The Multies & Concepts. Meaning Like When U Used Pay-Day, May-Day & The Day, See...It's Real Nooby-Ish Because You Only Change One Word In That. And Also This Was A Written Battle N' I Heard A Pause Like You Choked But It Was "Very Minor" Just Wanted To Point That Out To You Because Things Like That Costs You Pts & Wins. Listen To How Ya Flow Was At 46-The End It Was Nice N Delivery Was Decent Just Needed Harder Punches...Adjust That And My Homie I Guarantee You'll Improve In Ya Next Battles. Honest Opinion, FAIR VOTE IS IN! Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-28 02:23:46

gb tain this is what Iwas talkin bout earlier.. how I said good line but not dope.. in other words you could do better. Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-28 03:08:56

nh Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-28 07:08:38

One i jus cudn get it.. style was off, n lines werent as strong. tha other didn have direct bars but tha battle feel was there...Keep it up fellas. Tha Hoodz Vote. Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-28 08:47:39

gb Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-28 10:32:16

Gb Fv Vb if you can :] Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-28 12:13:56

fv,,nice baatle Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-28 17:06:02

deciphered Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-28 23:21:50

Tain: I'm not going to say impressive , I'll say u met your standards. I've heard the flow n multies many times .. Decent drop fam. You are always elevatin' and today you came wit it .. My favorite quotable was the Bottled nose dolphin line..pretty nice. 1 thing I'd like to see you improve is your punches and making the 'K.O.' hits more known to your audience. I know you like to write and sometimes working with 60 seconds is hard to get all your material in ..But remember pace yourself my dude. Another thing I liked was your wide variety of vocabulary. It was on point and u also brought enough energy So I mean I can't complain.. Good listen. DaBuj2014: Overall .. Your performance was ..Hmm .. It was different. This is my 1st time listening to you and for this particular battle there's alot of grey area that could be touched up on. Your mic presence plays a factor in battling. Along with your mediocre punchlines and your 'I jus don't really care how I sound' flow. Most of the time ..Rhyming one word syllables..is lame. You had simple schemes ..No quotables worth mentioning.. I do think you have potential though fam. It's weird .. Sometimes u would be on point .. then u just totally lose me then pick up and then lose me again. Re-read your verses and make sure you're writing them in 'bars' and not just writing down run-on sentences. Proof read , paraphrase .. Im throwin fv ..Listen'd twice Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-29 13:33:35

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Posted on: 2012-07-30 12:46:49

Tain you've improved, bro.. Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-30 18:38:15

removed low rate Voted: Tain / DaBuj2014
Posted on: 2012-07-30 18:40:22