Feel free to write if you have to. Fresstyling to a beat this fast sucks Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-27 08:17:02

Yeah bro, couldn't hear you for half of it though. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-27 17:03:03

fv Voted: DaBuj2014 /
Posted on: 2012-07-27 19:09:35

@ DaBuj U makin AZ look bad stop rappin. Voted: DaBuj2014 /
Posted on: 2012-07-28 03:11:12

DABUJ-YOUR FLOW WAS ALRIGHT FELL OFF AT TIMES THROUGHOUT YOUR VERSE HAD LITTLE TO NO PUNCHLINES IN YOUR VERSE.YOUR PRESENCE ON THE MIC WAS BELOW AVERAGE.FOR IMPROVEMENT ON FLOW ID FOCUS ON RAPPING TO AN EASIER BEAT WHICH WILL LEAVE YOU MORE TIME TO SET UP YOUR PUNCHES THEN AS YOU PROGRESS START MOVING TO MORE COMPLICATED BEATS.FOR YOUR PRESENCE PEOPLE LOOK FOR HUNGER AND EMOTION THROUGH YOUR VOICE SO TRY ADDING THAT THROUGHOUT YOUR VERSE AND YOULL SEE A SUBSTANTIAL CHANGE IN YOUR RATES-KEEP GRINDING MAN.EXILED-YOUR FLOW WASNT TOO BAD NEITHER BUT IT WASNT THE BEST ALTHOUGH YOU DID MANAGE TO THROW A FEW JABS IN THERE NOTHING REALLY HARDHITTING BUT DEF WERE SOME JABS THROWN NONETHELESS.YOUR DELIVERY ALSO NEEDS SOME WORK.LIKE I SUGGESTED TO DABUJ BASICALLY THE SAME THING TO YOU YOU SEEM TO HAVE THE FUNDAMENTALS DOWN ON ATTEMPTING TO SET UP A PUNCH NOW ITS ABOUT HOW ITS EXECUTED THAT ACTUALLY MAKES IT HIT.TRY FINDING AN EASY BEAT THAT SUITS YOU AND JUST CYPHERING TO IT NOT NECC A BATTLE VERSE THEN WHEN YOU GET THE CYPHER DOWN TRY AND THROW IN SOME PUNCHLINES IN THE MIX.REMEMBER GUYS IMPROVEMENTS ARE THE KEY.KEEP GRINDING FELLAS Voted: DaBuj2014 /
Posted on: 2012-07-30 11:47:02