Lemme know if anyone wants expo, pretty sure it's not necessary for this but I felt a little uncertain about it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-04-09 21:25:18

ok... k melo - not bad. i'll start w/ the positives. you had some decent ideas. for e.g. cory mat feeny was nice, execution could've been better but i'll get to that. Your made a decent attempt at scheming.. you were stretched in some areas though. your biggest issue for me was the wording in between punches; ruins the flow and impact of the punch. in terms of concepts, you still need to work on your complexity. for e.g. the lead up to the vacum theory was ok, but the wording let it down. try to keep it simple. sometimes its best to keep it short n sweet. overall, not bad. ill4 - multies and flow are ight, but punches are weak n concepts are eh.. i mean - and i know i'm REALLY stretching my intellect here - the box-cutters may have had potential if worded properly. but it just did nothing for me.. i mean, cabinet/cabin it????? naa dude, doesn't work. you've got to put more thought into your verse. right now it's just a bunch of multies thrown together with the hope that you sound like you've dropped a punch, and as a voter, i find it hard to give you points w/ that aspect. in saying that, pretty even battle, but i got my winner. plain and simply, one had the more pertinent battle verse. keep grindin/ Voted: K-Melo / Bnas
Posted on: 2016-04-10 05:04:11

I felt one had a cleaner verse with clearer concepts. The other is coming along and elevating slowly but surely, but it was a bit hard to follow his verse in this one. Fair is in. Voted: K-Melo / Bnas
Posted on: 2016-04-10 16:37:00

One was way below his own standard, nonsensical stuff in there and weird WP idk man, the other was pretty evenly matched but came with a bit more effective stuff Voted: K-Melo / Bnas
Posted on: 2016-04-11 22:34:18

pisspoor battle, alot of basic rhymes thrown around, my winner here had some poor spelling but was more creative in conceptual ideas. loser was terrible imo.. poor concepts, and similes were poor in relation or basically done.. fairs in Voted: K-Melo / Bnas
Posted on: 2016-04-12 02:26:14

I have to agree with insupp here.. as where one stretched his concepts out a bit much the other weakened his with the inbetween words.. both didn't land anything solid. Great potential attempts. But to many flaws. Honestly for me both verses was hard to read at moments.. some concepts jus didn't make sense. All in all both guys came to the ring. My vote jus goes to who I felt tried harder.. no hate g'shit both Voted: K-Melo / Bnas
Posted on: 2016-04-12 14:11:41