Lethal! Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-04-02 16:43:35

expo: LG is a company that makes televisions Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-04-02 18:00:44

Shodan: Damn homie, you left the other dude's name in the verse, that's hard to ignore. And if it's not there because the verse was for Rican, but because you were just calling your opponent Papi, well... that's bad too lol. You do have a decent verse here though. It's quite clean as far as flow and legibility. Hell, it's perfect. The punches are a bit weak though. I mean the bend-ja-men wp was real nice but idk, the punch was made bland to me by the "without mentioning button" concept. The same goes for the "without buying a new television" punch. It falls flat going from a fresh wp into a basic punch like that. Lockhart: Rebuttals in a one round format always bother me. Especially in a text battle where you have tons of time to write it. As irresistible as this rebuttal undoubtedly was, it's still unfair. You're punches were hitting hard enough for me not to have much problem with the verse as a whole. It was effective. I think maybe I'm not fully understanding the opener though... I figured I would mention that for all you "if ya don't get it don't vote" type fools. I'm fully capable of totally missing a hot concept, but I catch most of em so my opinion is: if I don't get it, you missed the mark. GB fellas Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2016-04-03 20:41:27

Major flaw when 'Papi' is your stunt double lol.. It was a personal rebuttle atk vs a misfired verse. Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2016-04-04 19:04:41

This was a nice battle winner was more polished.. Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2016-04-04 22:05:02

One had a pretty weak drop then what I am use to seeing from him...The verse was obviously meant for someone else but not only that it felt like u rushed it in parts..The other seemed more organized and was digging the approach as well as the rebuttals...One took it clearly here the fairs in..Keep grinding guys Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2016-04-04 22:57:43