Expo - of course y'all know what "so so" means . Yo Cel , thanks for sending it . good battle . Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-09 11:25:27

multis were not great from either . lot of slanting , forced and awkward wording - like the end of both drops , might be my accent but for me syndrome and sick puns just does not do it for me , and the same goes for the other guys drop - dialect slow so / biters blow job / . sayin that , winner has the upper hand in punches ,concepts and execution so gets the win . loser has potential , just work on wording and take time to write bars , re-read it see if u can improve it it any way . fv n nh. Voted: AfterLife /
Posted on: 2015-12-09 14:39:17

one had better concepts n punches fairs in Voted: AfterLife /
Posted on: 2015-12-10 01:16:29

One had some multis that didn't match up well in terms of rhyming. The ideas are there but you need better wording and you need to make sure your concepts to flips actually make sense. The winner had a smoother verse with jabs that landed. A few predictable bars but it was enough to take the W. Fairs dropped Voted: AfterLife /
Posted on: 2015-12-11 11:39:16

One sided...most of loser's attempts at punches didnt make sense. multis were up and down. the other did just enough to win. Voted: AfterLife /
Posted on: 2015-12-11 15:47:21

Kinda one sided ones name plays and overall concepts took this..The loser had things that didn't rhyme in there u were forcing at times...As far as punches yours didn't hit hard do to not fully executing concepts and forcing rhymes...The fair is in. Voted: AfterLife /
Posted on: 2015-12-11 22:06:46

One was Better in most aspects, be it Scheme, Punches, Structure etc. loser Had Ups and Down in his Multis as well as Structure NH GB Voted: AfterLife /
Posted on: 2015-12-11 23:04:34