Cleaner wording and better concepts and execution of those concepts took this one. Fairs in, i'm out. Posted on: 2015-11-22 21:50:42

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Posted on: 2015-11-21 21:11:43

EXPO !!! numbers/maths - dimes , three and seven are both prime numbera , as is 37 and its reverse , 73 . hence 'prime target' // a-cute (acute) is an angle of less than 90 degrees // hypotenuse - longest side of a 'right angle' triangle // obtuse is an angle greater than 90 but less tha 180 degrees , and also means being deliberatley stupid // a lot folks quote the 3-16 line , but pi is 3.14 , so beating him is easy as pi/pie ... Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-11-22 21:43:16

Not bad guys both brought some decent concepts...The difference to me was the readability and how one expanded on their concepts. The fair is in. Voted: DESSA / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2015-11-23 14:34:15

I like how both were scheming throughout but one lost me in some of their sets while one's cadence wasn't matched here. That being said Ddt you had kind of a super reach with that sin but line and that James bond/michael jackson line threw me off because they seemed paired together, but you showed a lot variety in ideas which was cool. Coff you were pretty nice in this one, had a decent math scheme but the lines came of a little dull after a while Voted: DESSA / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2015-11-24 22:27:03

Both had punches packed but the W'er had a better flow though it felt off at some points. There was a relevant creative material in the W'ers feed that took the W. L'er just sticked to a complex read hard to interpret but had his jabs which were a bit lighter . fairs In. Voted: DESSA / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2015-11-25 03:01:09