This was very poor from both sides. Ones multis where crazy'll slanted, to much for my liking. He had a good concept going on though feel the connection could of been better an he should of played around with it a little more to gain a solid impact from it. The other had a good opening going on to his bar though the first half of his bar has nothing to do with the second half of his bar. Also has one line in there that has nothing to do with anything in his bar at all... his ending line/punch line wasn't bad, could of been executed an awful lot better though. Fairs in. Posted on: 2015-11-16 09:54:42

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Posted on: 2015-11-10 05:48:20

One had a better concept with slanted rhyming but was more organized...The whole line related to eachother...Could of had more impact though....The other had problems with his punch as the idea didn't relate to his end punch fairs in though. Voted: Student / Lizman
Posted on: 2015-11-20 17:47:56

High-low. Winner maintained a relevant and relate-able setup which helped his bar's impact. Voted: Student / Lizman
Posted on: 2015-11-20 20:10:54

What everyone else said Voted: Student / Lizman
Posted on: 2015-11-20 21:47:08