The FVC is back in full swing folks. Need fair votes? Hit the threads up. http://www.letsb eef.com/forums/forum display.php?f=572 Posted on: 2015-10-20 22:26:13

Both were little weak here in this battle. B.o.l: your multi count is off and so is the rhyme in your multis. Need to work on them more. Also set ups and punches. Keep at it though. J.i: nothing heavy here. Your opening scheme was ok, though could of been tighter/closer together to get the proper flow of an AABBA scheme. Second piece was a good concept, feel like it could of been extended an elaborated on more. Next bar didn't really rhyme at all. Wasn't that much of a punch either, comes across as a filler bar due to its execution. Ending bar had a good concept but again wasn't worked out well enough/executed properly to gain the full sting of It. Overall: this wasn't an impressive battle, both have some work to do. Keep at it though. Need any tips, hit me up. One done enough to edge this. Fairs in, I'm out. Posted on: 2015-10-21 09:55:52

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Posted on: 2015-10-19 04:32:51

Fv imo no ahte dis battle was close but better flow n lyrics took it No hate return fv back in.! Voted: bars-of-legend / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-10-19 08:50:54

nwab.. you don't understand lyrics my man. stop voting on my shit. really Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-10-19 10:36:00

Ok. Bro. Legend. Ya bars need some work homie. Don't say it's h8 when it's the correct vote and it's fair homie. Swayish/bullshit comments unnesecary. You will and can get banned for that shyt. But anyways. Although my winner was lyte. He did have better structure and constructed ACTUAL conceptual punchlines. You legend needs to incorporate fresher ideas. Also you wording and readability is off from the way you construct your lines and mix match words within the punches. Also. You need to work on transitioning into different punches. I felt your entire verse was a run off of one line or concept stretched beyond belief. Bro I couldn't tell what was the next lunch or when the next idea started. But still I've seen better stuff homie keep at it. You can swerve into the text side. I was like you when I first started. Just keep at it. Peep my profile or hit my shyt if you want help. One. Voted: bars-of-legend / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-10-19 13:36:29

wow dope bars from my winner fierce I like tht. gd from loser guess u just got a unlucky opponent no h8 gd both Voted: bars-of-legend / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-10-19 19:49:23

Pretty close. I liked ones flow although his punches could have been set up better. His first line was killer. My loser had good content too and again I thought it was close. But I preferred ones Verse over the others. I can see this going either way. Fv no hate. Voted: bars-of-legend / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-10-20 07:00:22

close but one was just funny while both had multies and punches Voted: bars-of-legend / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-10-20 10:32:31

One was OK but could of came harder . The other just had no landed punches Fv in Voted: bars-of-legend / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-10-20 18:26:06

halfway my loser was doin' ok, but then that shit went, well I don't know for sure. Voted: bars-of-legend / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-10-21 01:57:02

11:11 In Thiz..If Ya Ain't Knowin Ya Better #GetRight Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-10-21 07:19:42

One won because of his better rhyming. One dude tried to have concepts, but they were awfully written. His rhymes didn't rhyme in some places. The other dude had some shaky, overly wordy rhyming and subpar concepts, but was readable. This was a clear victory. Mid-High. Fair's in. Voted: bars-of-legend / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-10-21 13:48:35

FV Voted: bars-of-legend / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-10-21 16:37:37

"nwab.. you don't understand lyrics my man. stop voting on my shit. really" = haha, at least someonw else feels my pain winner had better bars.... bars, now you feel my pain aswell Voted: bars-of-legend / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-10-21 20:06:53

votes show how this battle is... nuff said, was expecting some where around the vote sway Voted: bars-of-legend / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-10-21 20:12:49