Leaning this way. Just felt the bar more; it had a better punch to me. Voted: Insuppressible / NOBLE
Posted on: 2015-04-15 19:26:03

Wasn't feeling either of these as much as the concept aspect goes. But the loser didn't really finish off with a punch or connecting aspect, a slight-slight jab that would be more filler if anything. I was hoping he'd go somewhere with the idea to make the outcome connect. The winner, concept was iffy and I've seen it used before. Feel like you did a better job of building up and landing a light punch. Overall, it's better punch effectiveness that won this. Keep elevating! Fair's in. Voted: Insuppressible / NOBLE
Posted on: 2015-04-15 23:26:38

Felt like one had a really great concept but the execution was a bit poor. WHile the other had a much more simple concept that wasn't amazing but was still decent. Nice drops fellas. Voted: Insuppressible / NOBLE
Posted on: 2015-04-16 00:24:21

I just felt one executed his bar better overall. The other had a nice idea but didn't really execute it enough for it to be effective. Fairs dropped Voted: Insuppressible / NOBLE
Posted on: 2015-04-16 06:01:39

Pretty much agree with Obey on this one, felt like one's wasn't technically a punchline more of a slight jab although the multi's were on point. The other's didn't have the freshest concept but they executed their punchline correctly. Overall this was a decent battle, fair's in fellas. Voted: Insuppressible / NOBLE
Posted on: 2015-04-16 17:41:07

Aight, you can tell one really rushed it here, it is present throughout the entire bar despite nice rhyming, he extremely lacked in depth behind the line and left the reader with a vague understanding of what one should be taking from it as the true idea of the concept, sloppy..the other covered the textbook idea of a one bar: double meaning dealing double the blow accompanied w/ smooth wording that gave it truly a good read, also don't know if ever seen that so depressing play ever used before so fresh from these eyes..I got my winner fellas, always expoed..//fair1 Voted: Insuppressible / NOBLE
Posted on: 2015-04-18 03:07:04

Forgot to vote he he Voted: Insuppressible / NOBLE
Posted on: 2015-04-18 03:07:54