Ehhh, k. Loser your rhyming was iffy in a couple of places, so much that I wondered why some of the things were even capitalized. Also, your bars that hit the hardest were both very played nameplay that have been used against your opponent numerous times. Winner, I was surprised at how you did your rhyming here. You started it off Kosher and then went into a weird pattern, which im referencing is the bar above your closer. I wasn't feeling the ABBBA pattern, Something like ABAB would have been better, or even ABBA would have been better. Also, your closer was lazy, you are better than that. Giving the edge to one for personals and being more consistent. Loser, killed yourself with the played nameplay. Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2015-01-02 14:07:45

Tha winner had more impact, nothin hit too hard but it was enough. A bit more consistent too, imo. Tha lack of creativity from tha other hurt him here, makin his drop real hit n miss. Keep tha concepts fresh. Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2015-01-02 14:28:35

agree with the above ..seen the nameplay before , needs something fresher to have any impact imo . winner had some ok lines but ending was a bit messy but still done enough beforehand to take this . but gb and nh ... Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2015-01-02 15:04:48

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Posted on: 2015-01-02 19:23:10

winner was little good Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2015-01-03 04:25:02

Definitely dropped the ball on this one. Still shaking off rust. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-01-05 03:40:26

#KeepGrindin' Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2015-01-05 05:21:16

It was close but my winner had a better verse even though he is much better than this. Fairs tossed. Send I'm back fellas. Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2015-01-05 12:27:56