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Posted on: 2014-11-24 19:13:58

Official LBT Battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-24 21:44:04

I felt this was just a body bag, to be completely honest. As usual, I will start with my loser. You came swinging some heavy hits at first, but you gradually weakened the strength of each punchline, like you were running out of ideas after about the first third of your verse. Just a little bit of a recommendation; if you ever notice that happening, and you can't think of any more good punchlines, put the best ones near the end of the verse, since that's what people are going to "leave" your verse with the best memory of. I also feel like your structure and bars were somewhat fractured, and didn't go together well. Work on consistency, keeping relevant setups, and molding your ideas into separate, complete, bars. I don't have too much to say about my winner, but he was dominating this by a huge margin. I found his punches to be much harder-hitting, his bars to be excellently constructed, and his readability factor to also be higher. He had me going OOOOOH a couple times, as well, which is always the #1 thing a verse (aside from simple, basic coherency, of course) should be aiming for. This was very one-sided, and one's got this easily with a much better grasp of battling, overall. Fair's in. Voted: Obey /
Posted on: 2014-11-24 21:57:05

one edged with consistency an more punches fv in vote back thanks Voted: Obey /
Posted on: 2014-11-24 22:49:21

Felt my winner was a bit more out of box and original in concept angles scheme work was on point. Couple hiccups here and there but overall more consistent.loser started off ok.but faltered as he went on and a few wordplay combinations were hella forced and didnt make much sense with the punch... overall this was indeed a bit one sided..but not by much.. Voted: Obey /
Posted on: 2014-11-25 03:36:30

I felt both homies were doin they thing but this way with the fair ima keep it concealed for yall.. peace Voted: Obey /
Posted on: 2014-11-25 22:10:41

Dooooooope battle fellas!..Respect to both..So my Winner won this with purely executed punches. Nice Drop!.. My loser had me all over the place at times. So therefore it was harder for me to feel the punches cause at times they were not adding up the way u structured your verse. Good scrap and keep at it!..Return the FV both of you!.. Voted: Obey /
Posted on: 2014-11-26 15:45:23

Dam sick battle read both like 7 times having a hard time making a decision both deserve 9"s might be back for my vote Voted: Obey /
Posted on: 2014-11-27 10:02:03

Alright I'm going to lean this way after so many reads I felt he edged it with the punches but way too close~ Voted: Obey /
Posted on: 2014-11-27 12:16:59