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Posted on: 2014-02-02 19:02:14

Freak Mc, your wordplay "G-RRRILLL YA" was off. Gorilla isn't pronounced Gorillya. I could barely get a diss out of your diss. Nothing seemed too forced, but what are you talking about. What does bush have to do with anything? Is he bush? What is bush? You're not setting anything up. You're trying to throw punchlines that are not even there. Snoopy was more on point, though Meningococcal disease is caused by a bacteria that spreads widely through the blood system, so I don't know what you were trying to do with that punchline. it didn't make any sense. "Trigger Dots" has nothing to do with Meningococcal disease. I see what you did with the Solar Panel Punchline. Good one, though you should leave out the "his bars" part after the "energy build up" because it weakens it. You should somehow incorporate that before the "energy build up" part. If you want a hard packing punch, it shouldn't even be in the sentence unless it is part of the punchline. Unless a Solar Panel has bars, it shouldn't be in the sentence. You could of said, he wouldn't have energy build up in his bars if "THEY" were Solar Panels. It would of made it more stronger. The "taken by storm" part didn't make any sense. "Reigns" means to rule so you actually credited him. You probably could have incorporated the "taken by storm" part with the Solar Panel part since a Solar Panel gets it's energy from the sun's rays because there both talking about weather, but you will have to do something amazing because a storm is rain, lightning, and thunder, but there both weather. You will just have to think and find similarities. Overall, the winner had more well put together piece. He created a picture, he had a diss, and he did better than his opponent. Voted: The Ghost of Freak / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-02 20:03:12

winner was more creative. that solar bar line was fresh. Voted: The Ghost of Freak / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-02 21:14:19

Fairs In more experience won this with stronger punches, better multis, flowetc.No Hate Voted: The Ghost of Freak / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-03 09:46:53

EXPO: "The bush" is a term used for rural, undeveloped land or country areas in certain countries…. it also refers to the ex-president's voter base (demographics) and a woman's pubic hair…. so the punch was he isn't president (like the Manchurian Candidate), because he couldn't pick up the Republic voting base, because he is gay, so therefore not into women… just so you know what I was going for there. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-02-03 10:05:39

Both were good IMO. One had some decent multies with good conceptive punches. The other had a good usage of multies with some fresh punches as well. I felt one came a bit stronger tho IMO. Fairs in fellas. Edged. Low to med 7's. Voted: The Ghost of Freak / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-03 11:01:34

reaching in the punche you shouldn't should more than a second or two trying to figure out the punch it was a little more understandable quicker Voted: The Ghost of Freak / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-03 15:45:56

fairs in..gb Voted: The Ghost of Freak / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-03 16:40:18

fv Voted: The Ghost of Freak / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-03 18:11:49

Dude had a better overall verse no hate fv Vote back on my recents~ Voted: The Ghost of Freak / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-03 19:21:33

avg not bad Voted: The Ghost of Freak / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-04 05:12:49

ahhhh...close battle.. if it was audio one might of took it.. but my winner had a better flow, stronger set-ups, & rhyme scheme. Both had some iight wordplay, nothing spectacular. would like to see a round two. fairs in. Mid to low. ~1~ Voted: The Ghost of Freak / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-04 17:16:44

Good battle fellas! Voted: The Ghost of Freak / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-05 04:35:26