3rd times the charm. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-15 01:10:59

Expo just in case.. The Houdini died from doing a stunt where someone punched him in the stomach. Greg Maddux was a HOF pitcher for the braves. Rocky trained on the raw beef hanging before fighting Apollo. Everything should be understood. Good battle Mac, g'luck. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-15 12:57:47

This wa pre dope battle tbh. Both had some good name play nice set ups and some stingers.I felt one was more consistent and seemed like he worked a bit more on his verse and the other came out strong but sort of fell off at the endish IMO. it could probably go either way tho. Low to med 8's. Voted: Obey / HIGHpothasis
Posted on: 2014-01-16 03:05:11

fairs in, real solid read here, ones wording was just better, and punches came off smoother, still needs to work on more hard hitting builds, the other needs to work on a little more direct punches w/ more creativity outside the box. 100 Voted: Obey / HIGHpothasis
Posted on: 2014-01-16 08:27:16

Obey : I liked the opening concept. Setup was relevant to the punch and the punch did hit. A wordplay in the setup and a nameplay in the punch was a good idea to structure your bar.Pretty good rhyme scheme in the second bar, couple of internals were good , nameplay and actual concept i liked again but here bull-pen, mattixx / maddux were lil force as far as pronunciation is concerned. I liked the dopeman reference here but its quite played now imo.. also in your rhyme scheme gayness and ways of were unnecessarily capped, they dont really rhyme. Gay - way is ok but ness / of ? pretty questionable. Apollo/rocky plays were fine, rhyme scheme was fine. But punch was just average imo, concept wasnt nicely executed in this one. The mark line was fine with multies and concept was good. Punch was again average.The last bar was crack lol I laughed a lot on the line haha dope one. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -- - - - - - - MaCc : Opening punch was clever and good but conceptually the angle taken was basic imo, obey/disobey is pretty predictable. Smoke trick was cool, but I didn't like the idea of using the initial letter as his name twice in a line as a nameplay. Doesnt really works tbh.Lol this bar was average, was Pro-text-shunned an attempt to wordplay with Protection? If yes then it was a fail to be honest,concept was fine. Old bay / Obey was forced. Play girl - thug of the week was funny as fuck lol.. scheme was good in this set of lines.The turn bull - double cheese burgers concept was nice, i liked that part but your closer was just average in my opinion. Overall a good battle. My vote goes to the guy with slight better concept, better punches and cleaner wordplay. Fair is in fellas. Voted: Obey / HIGHpothasis
Posted on: 2014-01-16 10:48:35

Great battle here Voted: Obey / HIGHpothasis
Posted on: 2014-01-16 15:20:06

One had some clever angles and wordplay.. but wording towards the second half read awkward and a few wordplay felt forced and unnatural..try to write your bars like your naturally speaking.. so it feels more fluent and doesnt make a reader grit his teeth.. one was the opposite.. sounded natural and beginning had a few decent concepts but then resorted to filler multis and concepts grew weaker and weaker... my advice is too keep that style of wording that makes the read easier to follow like natural speech.. lose the forced wordplay in some areas. And work on stronger concepts and keep em coming... fairs in to the more consistent one Voted: Obey / HIGHpothasis
Posted on: 2014-01-16 19:11:19

Winners verse was more creative, had better punches with proper set-up... Other dude was solid, good flow. But there was waaaaaay too much filler to pick up the win... FV in Voted: Obey / HIGHpothasis
Posted on: 2014-01-16 23:54:44

This was a really close call and i have changed my mind a few times here. to me, one had the more original concepts but the wordin let it down and sometimes it felt like u took too long to get to the point. the other was real smooth and was jabbing through out, but thats all they were, jabs. there wasnt really any punches that made u think damnnn that was hard. its a close 1 to call, but im edgin this way Voted: Obey / HIGHpothasis
Posted on: 2014-01-17 09:11:55

ehh... didn't car too much for either here... felt like my winner had some decent concepts... just bad wording... his flow was a lot better though... the loser had a decent flow but was kinda stretched in parts... had a tad better wording but the concepts were weak... fair dropped... Voted: Obey / HIGHpothasis
Posted on: 2014-01-17 17:41:21