Soo much writing haha ill accept it in about an hour if its still open Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 05:50:40

* Too much of CAPITALIZATION not enough multies, Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 06:39:35

Good luck getting this accepted xD Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 07:47:29

i would but its as long as hell jeeeeezzzzz Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 07:53:24

This shit been up awhile. Long as hell. Good read tho. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 07:58:44

Lmao. Tony gd read home def. Dope.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 12:26:08

Good Drop TTT. Hard enough doin 32 or 16 wit yah lol aint no way im doin a 64! #Keep-it-Up Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 13:06:32

damn you might as well grab a snickers waiting for this to be accepted yeesh Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 15:45:28

ALOTTA TYPOS... :high: Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 16:27:37

Idk if it was murda but a few shots went off Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 17:03:30

DAMMIT I WAS GONNA ACCEPT THIS TO LOL Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 17:38:14

High to low, id like to see the winner write more in the box just for the show of it, but overall his punches hit harder an overall verse was more direct an lines made more sense, the the looser shits good just gotta come harder with the punches, you got the verse just need to set em up a bit better, its no hate. FV GB Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 18:40:20

Finish ur breakfast boss..! Murda! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-10 21:01:12

dis jus goes 2 show me dat'chu suck and can't hold ya own. Why da FUCK wud u wanna repeat murder like Radio Raheem bein' forced by Irv Gotti @ gunpoint in da middle of a battle? Ol' kermit the frog ass nigga learn 2 grow sum balls and lemme kno when u got sum real bars #RETARDEDFUCK Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-11 09:26:43

Winning vote held down his approach threw-out, honestly the loosing vote would have got the W if he put more effort in it imo. none the less, loosing vote showed a lack of effort, while the winning vote held it steady although par for par he couldnt make anything stick out too much, against the apponent, consistency took over hands down. always fair, mid to low. Voted: Tony The TYGER / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2014-01-11 10:12:53

OK after reading both a bunch times took a cpl days and i have to giv my vote to the one whom i just felt like concepts & punchlines hit a bit better.. both came raw ...one jus had a nicer flow to it.... 64 iz a fuckn lot lol.. both had fire def worth the time & a great read from both... the skills show in both veres...both had a gd consistency level. great job to u both no h8 fv Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-11 15:58:55

Fv tossed no h8 Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-11 21:39:57

TONY ------- I'm makin' VISUAL SCORES......... VISITING MORGUES ------ Scheme was SOLID. I liked the way you actually framed your bar, your Concept was not stable to be honest, you tried to drop some horrorcore kinda shit but it punched just average. --------- He's on da 'down-low' dats what tranny WOMEN ADORE......... VICTIMLESS WHORES --------------- Again, scheme was fine. Punch was average again. I see some filler shit here. The Macc out thing had me laughing. ---------- He's a 'little worn out' like a MIDGET IN SHORTS...........VEN OM IN PORN ---------------- Now this was honestly filler. Rhymes were fine but I can hardly see any punch here. All I see is imagination lol.. wife disses are played as fuck though... try to think something that isn't played and dont just write bars for the sake of rhyming. ----------------- Ur makin' "dope hits"? Then i'ma CLIP DA MEAN MAG........GUILLOTIN E CHAMP ---------------- This one was a good bar, I liked the punch and the concept, plus multi scheme and framing was on point ------------- Wit' da Incredible Hulk punches i'm layin' ENEMIES FLAT......VICTORY RAPS ---------- lose with/victory raps was just a "FAKE" attempt to attempt a metaphor to be real honest... lol it didn't really hit and punch was flat. Also the whole shit was just rhyming but had actually no punch... try avoiding such fillers mate. ------------- i'll get'cha "mouth washed up" without a LISTERINE PLAN........WIZARDRY CRAFT --------------- Now I feel I'm her security thing was a self diss lol.... fan/she blows concept was played... punch was weak. --------------- If 'i cue ya favorite rapper'?? Ur just an INDISCREET FAN........BILLY JEAN DANCE -------- teach go way back - history class concept is played again.. billy jean dance thing was okay but it was a simile.. i would appreciate if you try attempting actual metaphors. they punch harder in my opinion.-----------I 'm get'n "sticky wit'cha honey" like KILLER BEESWAX.......HENNES SY BATCH ------- I felt this one was a self diss too, and again dissing his girl over and over is awful and boring as fuck. Weak. -------------------- ---- Its get'n hazardous like Dennis the Menace in a CHEMISTRY LAB....... LIMOUSINE CRASH ----- now u started with a complete chemistry concept, chemistry,heat etc but later you switched your concept. Also, the limousine crash was a filler set to be honest. It had no relevancy with your original bar. Also I felt 2-3 sets were just put up coz they were rhyming with the original scheme. ---------- You's a GIMMICKY FLASH in dis ENMITY BLAST.......MINI-ME' s DAD ------- Most shit was filler here. Vicious streak wrath was forced to be honest. Conceptually and punchwise the bar was weak. ------- Ya wifey knows dat i'm 'The One' like TRINITY's MAN......... SMITH WIT' STEVE NASH --------- Now again wife diss was lame. lifes a bitch and other things were filler. Im fucking up yo bitch ass was poorly framed. Didn't understand whos bitch ass? His wifes? whack... grizzeats? whack and gay as fuck. there was no punch in this. But yeah.. the WHOLE clip da mean mag --- smith with steve nash SCHEME WAS DOPE AS FUCK and its really hard to keep the same scheme rhyming for so long so RESPECT, for that but you should also look after the punch factor coz multies wont win you battles. ----------- Plus ya SWAG IS OFF BASE u BRAG WIT' FALSE CLAIMS....BLASTIN' OFF TRAYS ------- -------- SWAG IS OFF BASE ----- PASSION ALWAYS every thing was filler. Mad pissed all day was forced. Only punch I felt was cafeteria fight and explosive one but they were weak too. -------- ow here's a MAN WHO LOST FAITH but wanna TAGALONG BRAVE ------ DROPPED HANES ------ Here FAN OF WALES was off syllables, rest was filler. Overall I liked your verse as far as scheming and rhyming is concerned because I feel that was your main focus and u excelled in it. But punch wise lotta shit was filler and there were less amount of good punches in quantity. In 64 line you should atleast have a punch or two that should be stuck into the readers mind but u failed in it imo. Any ways keep battling and props for writing 64 with tight rhymes. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-12 01:28:40

Grizzeat : Your whack af while im PINNING PERFECTION..... FINISH YA BREAKFAST! ----------Scheme was dope, tight rhymes out there, I liked the spin a reflection punch but mirror/reflection is pretty played. The whole primitive mesage part till the 123 flip was funny af lol. the finish ya breakfast line was nice. ----------- #GRRRRRRRRRIZZEAT Getting all booty bunched cause i VOTED FORREAL......... HOLSTER CONCEALED..-------- Arms around them punch was nice , holster concealed was good , other shit I didn't really liked.. repetition of the forreal in 3-4 sets wasn't really good to be honest.. coat it - fur real concept was nice but it really didn't delivered a good punch which was expected from the concept -------- Slice to tha midsection, Couple POKES TO HIS BUILD... 'LEAVING ATLANTA --------- Choke till he peels concept was average, tee n tee off was good... seeing is hands up punch was nice but i feel agreed ta a plan ta rhyme set was forced and it wasn't really necessary to cap it.Leaving atlanta part I didn't really get so no comments on that. --------- It dont take ma title to prove GRIZZY IS THA KING OF SCHEMES... 'REALLY IN THA SWING OF THINGS' ------- Rhymes were tight here, I liked the punch and the way you used the tiger nameplay here. -----this tha typa fagget that like SAUCE ON HIS LOG ...........WALKING Ma DOG! ----------- soccer involved punch was nice . I think brought you resolve and posh in this brawl were filler sets, walking ma dog punch was nice. ---------- Real talk tho, DUDE BE A SNITCH,..... Eloh 'THREW ME THA PITCH'! ------- I dig the concept and actually liked the way you framed it and used the nameplays. Punch was average tho , rhymes were fine -------- Pop Culture, this GROUPIE'S A BITCH...... T-toe: no JACKSON DISPUTE'! ------ heir/air wordplay didn't hit for me, i liked the last line the jackson dispute one but I felt most of the shit in this bar was filler. T toe nameplay was cool tho ------- MURDER MURDER---- LMAO FILLER. -----'scroll above got'em stuck in lines'; sumn like using SMART PHONES IN TRAFFIC.. Fuk that.. we're a 'CAR LOAD' OF MANICS thats about to prove if ever 'HARD DROVE, UR CRASHING' but nobodys ever 'Picking Ty-or going for a change' w/o an AUTO-MECHANIC! ----- this was dope. I have kept it full coz i feel this ones bar of the battle. I liked the actual concept and with good rhymes and added nameplays and a better punch I felt it came out to be a dope closer. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-12 02:03:30

Overall I felt tony conquered the multies cata with dope and wonderful scheme, grizz had better punches as well. So here is how I break down , Opener : Tony Closer : Grizz , Punches : Grizz , Multies : Tony , Personals : (Nameplays included in personals) My winner , Wordplays : NONE , Metaphors : My winner , Concepts and creativity : My winner , consistency and complexity : My winner. Overall i have my winner quite easily with better punches, metaphors, and ideas. Both were quite inconsistent to be honest and this wasn't best from my winner but still he was more consistent compared to my loser. Fair is in fellas.Mid to Low.. not impressed to see guys getting 7s in a 64 liner. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-12 02:08:54

Good shit tony....Fuck asking for votes Voted: Tony The TYGER / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2014-01-12 12:15:13

fuck you jason lol.. woulda posted that comment a bit earlier... I wasted my time voting on this -_- Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-12 15:03:19