#MURDER Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-05 05:42:32

I was feeling Sandy's concept's and Punchlines more, But Fairs In Fellas. Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-08 10:41:56

Felt both took a different approach to this battle. One has some dope concepts and the other just went straight in. I'll keep expos to myself to avoid sway. Always a fair! One edged it. Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-08 16:20:38

Loser honestly forced majority of his wp attempts. Throwing off the whole flow and making the punch harder to understand. A few times I had to go back and read and double check what's even going on. Readability is a big factor, believe me I have my own troubles. Work on making it fluent when it's said out loud. Concepts were nice though, just need to work on that execution. Winner was a cleaner read, had a nice scheme also towards the middle. Maybe had a little too much filler, but still had enough to take the W w/ a cleaner box. Fair's in fellas! Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-08 16:48:04

I read one and wasnt feeling the w/p at all the other did enough to get by. Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-08 17:04:13

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Posted on: 2014-01-08 17:06:02

Tony Gwynn was a DH for the San Diego Padres (DH's don't play in the field). His "son" Tony Gwynn Jr was also on the Padres (we on the same team) but he never played, it's a Double Entendre... Eric "Bledsoe" is a "Shooting" Guard for the Phoenix "Suns"... Everything else should be clear Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-08 17:11:29

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Posted on: 2014-01-09 02:19:44

I seen much doper shit from you to my advice is to keep the concepts fresh up the vocab alil bit and keep from generic phrases i see the potential but this battle wasn't up to par with other shit Ive seen from you guys . Vair Fote Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-09 04:22:09

Great battle. My reaction after reading a couple times each was similar to others. I felt one would have taken this if he had left expos out of the box and cleaned up his bars bit so his concepts and punches would land harder. The other just edged it with a bit cleaner read with some decent punches. This is really a toss up. RESPECT 2 both. Fv in. Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-09 11:42:20

Honestly one's verse was hard to read. The wordplay was forced and I felt he tried to have some creative concepts but the punches were lost in them. The other didn't really have anything too stand out but his punches were effective..fairs pm me for more detailed expo if wanted. Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-09 18:20:28

low 2 high 8's fv bitches Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-09 18:34:40

fairs in Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-10 02:16:15

Warsand : You started off well but then the wordplay failed. I liked the idea behind it and the angle you were trying to take was definitely good but honestly I felt it doesn't sounds perfect. A wordplay as you know should CONNECT IN BOTH WAYS as well as should be PERFECT IN PRONUNCIATION. You definitely attempted complexity and u get points for it but it definitely lessened the impact of your bar . One way connection woulda hit more harder in my opinion.The complete Whole number concept was DOPE. Its pretty difficult for noobs to understand but it was mad creative fasho.adore/adoors hit only (adore) single way. Open for digits punch was good.Court/caught was forced.Plus that concept was played.Fucked on a date was fine, not bad not good but above average. Overall your verse was good conceptually and creativity wise but was pretty inconsistent as far as punches were concerned. To be honest attempting complexity just ruined some of ur fire punches. Rather they woulda hit much harder if you had attempted them in a more simple manner. --------------- Eloh : Honestly, multies were off in the opening sets, your opening set up was stronger than ur actual punchline in my opinion.Middle bars were average/above average to be honest.Tony gwynn reference wasn't framed nicely to be honest.Baby diaper concept was basic.nameflip/came from the beach bar was good. Closing part was good in framing,wordplays and concept wise. Punches were above average.Overall your verse wasn't your best fasho, it had above average punches and some good nameplays. I got my winner on the basis of consistency. My loser was more creative and had the bar of the battle with no doubt. Fairs in. Generous rates. Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-10 06:15:56

Hot battle, one had lots of word.play the other was heavier w/ punches, enjoyed reading both boxes but this guy had sum lines that really stood out to me... b ez Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-10 15:04:47

close shit fair is tossed Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-10 16:19:53

mid to low, pretty close, some were on in some of the battle an some were off in the battle, back an forth on this one, one just had an overall better read to me. G-Shit fellas. FV Voted: SAND / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2014-01-10 21:11:05

Wow! this is really good from both Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-11 00:00:47