In Last Dragon Sho Nuff and Bruce Leroy are main characters and the glow is a level they try to achieve. Also Bruce is known for being able to catch bullets with his teeth. Illuminati symbol is a pyramid with and eye on top. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-17 03:30:42

ah...*focuses lens* Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-17 03:55:33

MURDER, 1. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-17 04:38:40

typo: slid sticks. #AntiLizmanSwag Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-17 04:42:24

OK Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-17 04:51:43

damn... it's MURDA! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-17 05:23:42

seen better from the loser, winner took it in all categories. good battle though, no doubt. ~1~ Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-17 14:08:11

good battle, probably the best verse i've heard from the loser, pretty close, one emcee just had some extra attitude with there bars and had a little more complex concepts. the other was dope to tho, def on the right path, just gotta get a little more vicious. Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-17 14:37:27

this was a decent battle,My winner started out strong,he had a nameplay which got a reaction outta me,it was clever in my opinion. Then the next bar was some ether shit,the concept was out of the box and fresh,It was executed properly,wording was proper, multies were a bit iffy but it would work if you say it out loud so i wont give him the heat for that. The closer was popping,the wordplay was some nice shit,i liked the execution of the whole concept. My loser was not bad,I mean I could see some concepts which could be top tier if he worked on not breaking his multies. His second bar punch was definitely popping,Just that the wordplay which followed it,has been used quite a lot before.The closer was actually quite creative in my opinion. My winner took it with better punches and metaphors,the loser had a great cadence too but lacked some hard body punches. Fair is in Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-17 15:01:29

thats a hate vote by the way ;) Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-17 15:02:38

MURDER. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-17 16:26:20

this was a mismatch. the winner had way to much agression and punches. Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-18 04:16:01

fairs in no h8 Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-18 05:01:05

this might seem lyk a sway but detailng Nomad's verse the illuminati eye thing its a bite from Isaac knox n sum of his multies didnt match iam an audio head by nature but been hogin texts not tat gud thou but i felt Griz got this on all catagories even thou he kinda skitered in the middle but picked it up all long the way ta the end so ta dna this Nomad verse wasnt tat bad but had few played concepts n cud have worded punches beter the fairs in Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-18 07:26:13

The losers flow was hard to read and wasn't feeling the punches ive seen him do alot better winner had a smoother flow with decent punches that's my decision no hate Fv vote back on my recents Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-18 11:16:07

- This FuCcing Guy Is Definatly ALWAYS on his Job. Smh. aint Seen a Weak Battle From Him in Ages. Landslide... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-18 15:54:40

both were well put together.. both had some dope concepts and punches but the winner was more polished and had stronger jabs. Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-18 19:49:26

Nomad --- You going one on one with a trained assassin, it's just YOU and ME BOY, no matter what he do believe me this DUDE'S DESTROYED, so front like you got some glow and you goin "sho nuff" catch a "slug" to the mouth like BRUCE LEROY! ----- Okay, you started off slow YOU and ME BOY/ DUDE DESTROYED looks forced due to the and in it. Punch was quite decent. ------- I'll out rap ya whole clique and leave a ROOM OF BODIES, so know when Nomad "appear amid" ya crew it'll be "I" on top like ILLUMINATI! ------ Eye/Pyramid/Illumina ti concept is quit predictable and used. Pyramid wordplay was bit forced. Punch was weak honestly------You tryin to study the competition? Please DON'T REVIEW it's HOPELESS TRYIN, whatchu bout to say? A buncha OVERUSED HOMELESS LINES? Let me help you out cuz this DUDE TRIPPIN, ya ain't TOO GIFTED, what you should say is "this chopper take his head off when that TOOL SPITTIN, but it's cool he a "Nomad" he use to having a ROOF MISSING" ------- Punch was average but I felt your rhyme scheme was weird. tbh. A - A - B - C - B - B . Either you accidentally capped the C scheme or may be something else. But Scheme was weird. --------I helped you out and that's CHARITY WORK, but yo garbo self couldn't never do what I can and hearing that CLARITY HURTS, lame nigga tuggin on Supermans cape then you better BE PREPARED, cuz "when deez" bars come ya way I promise you won't want BEEF, SQUARE! ----- nothing impressive, bar was stretched. Rhymes were at unequal intervals. Punch was below average. ------- My bars hot I should charge a SPITTIN FEE, soft nigga did you really think you could GET WIT ME, well you goin "see a "l" for thinking you "as" "sic" as me. See FAG you BASIC you don't even get that last bar was a "CLASSIC" STATEMENT! --------- Spitting fee / get with me/ classic statement. None of the capped words rhyme. Idk why is FAG BASIC capped? lol Punch was below par here too, Overall your verse started off decent but then ended in a declining graph way . You must focus on cleaner rhymes and metaphorical punches. -------- GRRRRizzzeat --------- imma make this quik fast..SWIFT W/ THA FLO not much namplay, cause natur'ly its hard 4 "nomad to PICK UP & GO" wen there are FIST TO HIS NOSE cause w/ GRIZZ U MOST KNO tha most VICIOUS OF BLOWS will make ya "Pack up & Give away: & there wont be any GIFTS FOR THA ROAD! ------ Packup/Give Away / Gift thing was good. Set up was pretty strong. Rhyme scheme wasn't perfect. FIST TO HIS NOSE/GRIZZ U MUST KNO had 2 syllables not rhyming in it. ---------- L8r duu.. & thats s'word to Warsand.. this lil AC fuk is in GREAT HARM...HONEST, ive heard of "Sliding into Disasters, but he slide sticks: & got STRATE ARMED/BRON'ISH" ------ Average bar, punch wasn't that effective tbh. Nothing much to say on this, punch was decent but setup wasn't that effective. --------- So since Chloro wanna "Tell" niggas they gone TAKE OUR SHINE, ITS to tha point i Believe "Agents wud appear" to RATE OUR GRIND.. SHIII, soon has he "Sing, i'll Pop up n Off-his place: no STATE FARM PROMISE"! ------- lol punch was good, actually I like the way you frame your bars man most off times they end up with a laugh,avoid fillers like SHIIII, its fine if you use it once or twice in a verse though. ---------- I mean, tho imma killer.. I accept religion..... But i ain too SURE ON HIS VERSE, cause it'll be easier to "Show this Pussy to a-hole: than a WHORE IN A SKIRT" cause Headshots exPLORE'N THIS JERK & I bet he'll "Catch a Round, Trip over his globe, & fall: but it ain a tiresome TOUR OF THA EARTH"! --------- slow start, but punch came off decent. WHORE IN A SKIRT /SURE ON HIS VERSE didn't rhyme perfectly ------- But yo, & as far as whaaa his bitch think? i can MORE THAN VOUCH that she said he's type "SNORE" WEN CROUCHED... Told that breezy, let ya her down, we can SORT IT OUT.. Next thing ikno... she gave "Mad-ah-Line: & he was BOARD-N-HOUSE" ---- average but SORT IT OUT was off the scheme.Alright, overall your verse had some good,some decent,some average punches. There were some sets of scheme that didn't rhyme perfectly. Wordplay/nameplay wasn't used much compared to ur other verses but since ur opponent didn't use it either, u get the cata easily. Mid 6 for loser, Mid 7 for winner. My winner had much consistent verse as far as punches are concerned. My loser was decent, but needs ta get better. Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-18 23:05:29

thx for all the feedback but @ kode I don't even know who the nigga is ur talkin about i aint bite nothin Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-19 01:34:48

Pretty much self-explanatory Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-19 08:23:50

Body-More, MURDA-Land... Good shit Nomad, holla at me five Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-19 12:07:26

Murda Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-19 13:51:38

Really great verse. Easy to read and flowed well. Congrats! Voted: The Nomad / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-12-19 14:06:05